Reviews for Breaking Point |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This was amazing! I was looking for something like this for ages and I'm glad I found exactly what I was looking for Thanks |
![]() ![]() ![]() Grear lost im2 fic, well done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is totally adorbs. I love it so much! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Like how you filled in the blanks for this kissing scene which should have been in the movie |
![]() ![]() Very sweet |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! Excellent job keeping them in character! I love stories that fit within the cannon. :) |
![]() ![]() Awww my otp is just so perfect together! You should have written the love scene tho. Hehehehe |
![]() ![]() love it! great fic! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was great! I was hoping to read a different take on Pepper's reaction after finding out things and you delivered it :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fantastic story! You really wrote these characters beautifully! I'm looking forward to reading more of your work! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing story! Love the concept and the execution. It makes sense that Pepper would eventually freak out about the fact that Tony was dying and she didn't even notice. I like that you lead up to that moment since she would be so occupied in first dealing with the mess of the expo and home. The subtle hints you gave along the way that led to her final meltdown really show that all your hard work and thought really paid off. The story was beautifully written. I love that everyone feels so in character and yet so affected by what happened. I like how you incorporated elements like the omelet and Nick Fury. The whole things was beautiful and I'm definitely favoriting it. |
![]() ![]() Bittersweet and wonderfully written |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh excellent really! Sad romantic and all |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh this is a great scene after the second movie :) |