Reviews for Coincidental |
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![]() ![]() ![]() As soon as the shirt was mentioned I knew that it was Eagle. Who else would wear something like that? Anyways, great story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() more! you should go on with this and into a story with (AU...so IDK do something about the mission) Alex going to Bagdad as well or them meeting again or SOMETHING! This is very well written too, I enjoyed all of it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha Wolfs grin should be feared |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi, this story is really great. I like it. You did an excellent job at writing. Well done. So no, it wasn't wasted. By the way, what did k-Unit do in Bagdad? I only got who is who after you mentioned their code names. But that's okay because it keeps interest and the code names are in quite at the beginning |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this, very well written :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really good, and I was thinking maybe it could be 'increasingly numb'? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hello again... Never inspired a whole chapter myself before, thankyou! Enjoyed the read; do you think Wolf practically putting Eagle in a headlock is his version of a hug? Rose |
![]() ![]() Awww! I like that a lot it. It makes me feel so HaPPy inside! I feel like giving Wolf a great big hug, can you believe it?! That was such a nice touch, having him write a letter. Also, I really like how you handled this idea. It just fits right in to cannon, at least for me. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() any more? this is good |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'll drop you a line, you just made a rhyme. LOL. Great story. I bet that if Alex was sent back to train with the K-unit it would just be like completely awkwardness(that makes no sense). |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting twist... that card really lifted Alex's mood :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() So funny! But why can't you make this longer?! You could get a full story out of this! A really good story! Like...I don't know, but I keep thinking back to this play called 84 Charing Cross Road about these pen pals who keep in touch over the course of 20 years. The pen pals never get a chance to meet before one of them dies, but the whole thing with the letter to K-Unit and Wolf's letter back just totally took me back to that play. Weird, right? Ah, didn't mean to spin off like that. I really liked the original story, and when I saw that it had been updated, I might have thought that you were turning this into a multi-chapter story. (And maybe I still am... :P) Either way, still awesome! Love your writing as always. Keep it up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was brilliant! I really enjoyed it, it was a nice sequel to the first part. The humour in it was fantastic! Well done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You write stories better than summaries, I'll give you that ;) Love the idea of a follow up scene where K Unit get the official notification of Alex being in hospital - with appendicitis! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I only knew it was eagle cause i read your other story where bradley is eagle. This was another amazing story. I think you captured what there reactions would be perfectly. ) |