Their names might not be the best, but the ship name would be atrocious. Nice little oneshot by itself, but it'd would be nice if there was to be more.

I absolutely LOVE Renesmee in this! It's weird, I normally hate her with a passion. But here? Here, she was sassy, fiery and totally badass. And I adore her as a vampire hunter(can you write something where she and Albus kill Edward?)as well, BTW. I love it, I love you and I love your Renesmee. Can I just tell SMeyer already? (And can you please, please, PLEASE write another Lily/Scorpius freeverse?)

I can SEE them resorting to using Asp and Arcee just to escape their parentally-inflicted moniker monstrosities around any non-wizarding friends. Of course, the alliteration may lead to a whole DIFFERENT level of teasing, but, hey, teenagers, there ya go ... ;D LOVED it, hope to find more like it, so catch ya on the flipside, A J.

Interesting and different and I get your reluctance. This was cute and successful, pleased to find it. I am particularly pleased to see Nessie run from her parents and her imprint. Thanks for resolving imprinting on a child.

Interesting crossover. Not something I would ever have expected, but it came together beautifully. I really enjoyed this! (Also, yes, 'Renesmee' is a terrible name.)

I love this couple!

I think that I ship them too hard. They are too cute.

And I liked that she's killing vampires, as odd as it is.

Tori

I loved this :)

I'm not a fan of Twilight (found it boring, mostly), but I did like some of the ideas presented in the series. It seems like an easy choice to cross over each series because of Albus's and Renesmee's over-the-top names. You make the crossover mesh well, and in a believable way. It's refreshing to see that you treated the Twilight part of the crossover with such respect, because it's almost too easy to rip apart Twilight for all it's flaws and let that overwhelm the narrative.

Renesmee's existence especially interested me a whole lot, because it wasn't presented all that realistically or interestingly in the original series. So I'm glad you gave her an actual personality aside from her perfection and her logic-defying birth. She's sarcastic, fiery and independent with enough mystery. I also like that her opinions of her parents are realistically and thoughtfully portrayed, without bashing them too harshly. Her interactions with Albus were sweet, and creative.

Sorry (but not really, haha) for the rambling, I just really enjoyed reading this.

Both. Love and Horrific Names.
I'd thought you took the dhampir bit from Vampire Academy, where many are but it's still pretty good. I'm really starting to like Albus/Nessie's

truly horrific names is better. the other's too sappy

lol. its so funny, and refreshing.

That is /weird/.

I love it. Seriously.

Good story!

that was brilliant. completely and utterly brilliant.

I loved it.