Plz write more chapters i cant wait to find out what happens will naruto tell the others what happened will he get captured again will he die i have to know i read this story 2 times and i still love it keep going plz

are you going to update?

Gah I need more xD that was so good yeah there were minor mistakes but nothing I couldnt overlook Gah don't leave me at a cliff I will jump xD the lemon was good I liked how he did get scared oh and adding references were great! :D whisker scars, believe it xD kudos to you angel :3

ROFL!Now that was funny...

:o -Gasp!- Naruto can't die...then it'd be tragedy! Anyways, I can't wait to get to the rape scene. I thought I'd be Sasuke raping Naruto but it's Orchiamaru raping Naruto. :/ Never read that before. No really. I haven't. Isn't Kabuto hot though? XDDD late azz disclamier. Lol.

Haha, Sasuke, you'll always be the clueless on in these stories. Hell! Your clueless even in the manga/show! But do you care. Yessss. XDDD anyways, short but hey, it's the pilot. :D

yay sasuke saved naru-chan! and aww the last bit's sooo sweet cant wait for the next chapter :3

Please keep up the good work, I want to read how the story ends. _

Good start, plz update soon