Reviews for School Uniform
ginabowman2005 chapter 30 . 8/25/2018
ginabowman2005 chapter 29 . 8/25/2018
What the heck?
ginabowman2005 chapter 28 . 8/25/2018
HA! Strip of bacon!
ginabowman2005 chapter 22 . 8/25/2018
I wish the links for the photos were still on your profile, I can only imagine how these outfits looked.
ginabowman2005 chapter 21 . 8/25/2018
So confused, in chapter 16, while they were in Russia, Alberta called and told Dimitri that Kirova had turned did she let Lissa have a dog in chapter 21? And it's one from a long time ago, that Rose knew already?

Plus it's Halloween? They went to Russia right before graduation, right? That's in is it October and they haven't graduated and gone off to Court then off to college in August, before it ever got to be October again...I think I must have missed something. October is about when the dance was when Victor kidnapped Lissa, then it's still November when "Hello, My Name is Rose Hathaway" takes place.

Then Frostbite started in December, Mason died in January. Rose went off to kill Dimitri on March 21, and when she got back there was 2 1/2 months til graduation so she was back at St. Vlad's mid April, only gone a month. They graduate in June, Lissa, Rose, and Eddie do all their stuff. Strigoi Dimitri kidnapped Christian and Lissa on her birthday, July 10, and Lissa restores Dimitri early the next day, July 11.

It's just days until Rose is accused of killing Tatiana and they go on the run by July 15/16/17. They're only on the run a few days, not even a week, until they're back with Jill and everything happens.

Lissa's coronation is before the end of July and Rose is healing from her gunshot wounds.

Adrian tells us all about what's been going on in "Adrian's Lost Chapter". It's his birthday, August 3. Then he's off to a dinner with Jill and everyone and that's why Jill is killed and he brings her back, Bloodlines starts there.

So unless I really missed something Halloween can't happen in this timeline. But it's your story and you can give them a Halloween story if you want. I just want to say I got completely confused here.
ginabowman2005 chapter 20 . 8/25/2018
I cannot believe that they informed Janine that Rose and Dimitri had died and then when they lived no one called her to let her know her daughter wasn't dead! She's made of stone I tell you, stone.
ginabowman2005 chapter 19 . 8/25/2018
Your story has gone to a place that no other story I've read goes. I can't imagine Dimitri's guilt over staking Rose. When they were walking around like that, I can only imagine the shock everyone was feeling, especially since Rose did die but Lissa brought her back. I can just see the students faces and their jaws dropping.
ginabowman2005 chapter 18 . 8/25/2018
OH MY STARS! What a chapter! This happens then that happens, Dimitri accidentally staked Rose and killed her then he tries to kill himself! What a mess! Like a Shakespeare play.
ginabowman2005 chapter 16 . 8/25/2018
This is so intriguing. I love how you're writing this story.
ginabowman2005 chapter 15 . 8/25/2018
Hmmmm, what's up with that?
ginabowman2005 chapter 14 . 8/25/2018
So, is it Christian's or Dimitri's?
ginabowman2005 chapter 13 . 8/25/2018
What a moving chapter. So very sad for both of them. I hope the next chapter is a happier one.
ginabowman2005 chapter 12 . 8/25/2018
I can't wait to see how you resolve this.
ginabowman2005 chapter 10 . 8/25/2018
They must look, and smell, dreadful! LOL!
ginabowman2005 chapter 9 . 8/25/2018
Why is Lissa in the cabin? I guess I missed the why...
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