This is so good!

I love this story so much! It's amazing! Best Alex Rider fanfic I've ever read! Your writing is amazing and I eagerly await the next chapter! Please update quickly! I want to know what happens to Alex. It would be really awesome if Alex visited the teachers at Brookland and had a conversation with them. But it's your story and I'm sure that whatever you write will be absolutely spectacular. And like I said before, I love your story so much and I can't wait for the next chapter!

Hi,
this story is really interesting. I really enjoyed reading it. Well done.
The teenage part of Alex gets out very good. I wonder when the others at his new school and the boys home will be contacted with the rumours of Brookland about Alex absences and how they will react. By the way, will anybody find out the truth? Will MI6 contact him again because of a new mission?
I vote for Alex and Josh to meet and maybe talk about Jack. But who is the mysterious e-mail-writer? Is it Josh, some kind of terrorists, a trap set up by MI6 or someone of his old school?
Please include Gwen more. I really like her and I think she is nice.

K so you have to update. Eventually. Please.?.
I actually really like this story. Its a different take on this sorta thing.
PLUS I LOVE TRENT AND DARREN AND BEN. THEY'RE AWESOME. And I really love the Boys Home setting.

This is a great story and you are a really good writer. I love Trent as he is funny and is always ready to do anything. I love all the boys in the orphanage as you gave them all really cool personalities please update soon I really want to know what will happen next. THANK YOU

I cried so hard when Jack was being so uncaring towards Alex. She claimed she cared, but she COULDN'T CARE TOO MUCH IF SHE WAS ALRIGHT WITH LEAVING HIM ALONE. I love this boom, please update,

Aww it's been 3 years. Can you write more? Are you planning to? I saw it on the recently updated list 3 years ago and suddenly remembered to try reading it seeing as I remembered being intrigued by your summary. And now I'm left feeling woefully incomplete! Anyways I obviously liked your story and hope you write more :).

Again, I really hope you continue this
I have hopes as you have been writing this story over two years... But please, don't just abandon this! I love Gwen, of course, and Trent, and all the characters you created, they're just amazing!

Update please!

You have not updated in forever, and it's a shame, because this is really a good story!

When are you putting up the next chapter you need to like now. This is amazing and you have to update soon. It has been a long time so update or else I'll *insert scary threat here*.

I thought this chapter flowed nicely. The dialogue worked and so did the angst.

Thanks for writing, update soon.
MG14

Good chapter please update soon x

this story is absolutley amazing! I love the Alex Whump and all the rumours that are going on with him! Wonder if the rumours at the party will spread? especially with these new bruises? Update soon! PLEEEASE

I know its been a while, but if you're still online, PLEASE UPDATE!