Excellent story, but he should have told her earlier! The two of them are terrible, can read everything about each other except the way they really felt. Glad they made it together in the end the way that soul mates should!

Thank you for sharing this delightful story with us! Sad that they had to be separated over the years, and that Jess had to die for them to be able to come together, but it was justice that their strength of character was rewarded and they reunited! Well done! I hope this note find you well and happy!

MAC IS A KANT! AND U ARE 2 FOR WRITING THIS STORY

Well, after wanting to kill you, i finally made it to the Harm/Mac part. I liked it. I like that you kept Harm and Mac mature after the marrage to Jess and didn't have them pining away for each other. WEll they were, but they weren't you know what I mean? ANyway, good story, I enjoyed it, and now I'm off to the "revisted" ones. :D

great story.

Very well done - tasteful handling of a viable relationship other than H&M. Just read this via another author's listing it as a favorite story. Janlaw (1/2 of McRose).

I love angst/romance stories and this story is the best one I have read in a year! Please keep writing!

This was so sweet! I really do need a kleenex.

Keep up the great work!

I am gonna kick your butt! lol. I'm actually crying! It's not fair..*tear* WHY COULDN"T STURGIS HAVE STOOD UP AND SAID HE OBJECTED BECAUSE OF WHAT HE KNEW ABOUT MAC"S FEELINGS TOWARD HIM FOR CRYING OUT LOUD? NE-wayz...I'm gonna go to the next chapter before I have another shipper attack...

This is wonderful! I can't wait to read the others in the series! Please,

KEEP WRITING!

That was wonderful & Sad and just perfect. I was skeptical at first, but this was great. Keep up the good work!

that was so oh my gosh wonderful! really enjoyed it alot. chapter 11 was adorable! great work!

This was a wonderful beautiful story. Well written and it seems that you put a lot of thought into it before writing it. I enjoyed it very much. Great job!

That was really great, and THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU for NOT naming their children "Harmon the 3rd and Harmony." But at the end where they died... that is so freaking depressing. Nevermind the fact that everyone's gotta go sometime... _;

Anyway, I think you did a great job the whole way through, and I'm sorry I've been a bad minion these past few days... I've been at a ladies retreat and had no access to a computer. The retreat was great, though... (*drools slightly, remembering the complimentary back massage, not to mention the cuisine, and the hot tub...*)

Ah, heh heh, sorry about that. Flashbacks, you know what a "pain" they are... hehe.

So... are you planning on writing a new series any time soon? Maybe a humor series, perhaps? Or you could write another angst; you are the first author who's gotten me to read angst in a looooooooooong time. Don't you feel special?

And, um, about my next chapter, it'll come out soon... I hope. (*Prays that she doesn't get in a car wreck in the woods near Chocolate's cabin and end up writing "Interdimensional Adventure" FOR Chocolate, a la "Misery."*) -_;;;

Is this the end? I really liked the story whether it is the end or not.