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![]() ![]() Next one plz |
![]() ![]() again short but relly you are good ! luv ya |
![]() ![]() i like it but its so short |
![]() ![]() Please update T-T I really love the book️️ |
![]() ![]() the story is very nice...its awesome should i say...i hope u could continue it without much troubles...best of luck to u and the story..thsnk u...and i couldn't wait for the part where hinata stops sasuke from going... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can't wait for more! Please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You should totally continue the story!;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Y'know, the way Sasuke's feelings for Hinata just suddenly popped up out of nowhere is really annoying. It always better to work it up gradually. It helps keep readers more focused on the story by building up the anticipation as their relationship progresses more and more. I really don't like how you decided to start things off. As I've mentioned before, it's far too sudden and the way you've portrayed some of the characters is way too OOC. However, the way you have Sasuke behave towards Hinata is just SO sweet that it more than makes up for everything. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Continueee (: it's a great story! They're all so cute together. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awwe. Sasuke cares about hinata a lot ! So cute . It was a great chapter . Please update soon ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i know this is abour hinata in the 7 team, but i want to see more romance |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay u updated loves it |
![]() ![]() ![]() okay very nice. please countiue. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome chapter love it please continue |
![]() ![]() I like this story a lot and can I request that may you update a little bit faster not to be rude or anything though |