Great Story and I loved the way they didn't need to talk to communicate it shows that whole meant to be but on a deeper level thing.

lol...not so angsty, & it ends pretty good (Puckleberry in bed together is ALWAYS good!)

Nicely done:)

really great story!

Wow this was intense! Good job, I loved it!

I really liked that writing, very sweet and flowed well for the emotions and thoughts that were packed in this. One thing though, you said Rachel says sorry, and then forgives Noah? What exactly did he do? Part from the not kissing her thing.

loved this!

Love it! They way you communicated so much with out words was amazing.

beautiful as usual ... then again i expect nothing less from you )

glad you're back to Puckleberry fanfic world ... more please?

Raw and intense, yet simple. I don't know what you did, but you did it well. You literally conveyed their emotions and actions beautifully. This was good, no, it was brilliant. I could feel how they emotionally evolved through the story and accepted that they needed each other. It wasn't a sexual thing either it was more spiritual and emotional experience between the two. Honestly I love this more than I can describe.

Thank you for sharing this with the public. It was amazing.

I love it! I really think you should continue with it... Your writing is so talented! you are now one of my favorite authors. I love how you got in their heads! and their emotions! WOW! I can sure use your help with my story. Right now, it kinda sucks. Cause I use more dialogue, than surroundings.

Brovo!

whoa, this was beautifully written

hey, i really liked this. it was well written and it wasn't cliche. it made the characters complicated and darker which i really liked. i guess you could say it made them real, more real than they are on the show. i just wish there was more, i really enjoyed reading it and it's so hard to find good fiction like this. well done.

I really loved this story. From start to finish!

It was beautifully written and I loved how their feelings evolved and how they both had to face their feelings.

Thank you for writing this gorgeous story.

:)

This was a really good story. There were a few grammatical errors here and there but other than that I really liked this story. You based their relationship on emotion and not just sex like a lot of other stories do. I felt bad for both of them but I loved how you had them connect and help each other. I also like how this was Puck and Rachel centered and not much of everyone else in the story. Thanks for writing this!

I absolutely loved this story. I love the way it was written. :)