I am at a loss for words!

This is undoubtedly my favorite fic EVER. It's so heartwarming :') 3 Definitely a tear-jerker. 5 stars! :) 3

beautiful :)

Ahhh! I loved it! :D I was panicking and thought he was going to die and panicked more and nearly cried on chapter 7...XD But yay! I'm happy now! :D

I love Edmund and part of my soul is freaking screeching. XP

This is excellently written, and I keep reading on even though my soul is sobbing at me to stop. Sorry, brain wins. (:

i love this! great job :3

First time I ever cried at a FanFiction. Beautiful.

I read this once and forgot to review sorry! It took me a while to find it too. It's beautiful! This is a great first story! There is a few punctuation and capitalization problems but I don't care... you did a great job.

That was beautiful... it made me cry.

But that's a good thing. You had me worried that it would a dreadfully sad ending, but I think you did well. Very nice!

~sammyk10169

So sad, you almost had me crying at the end. I could picture Peter in my head the whole time. When I read your story with Peter in it, it made me want him as an older brother even more.

I thought you did great with the charactorization for everyone, and your descriptions were so detailed.

I really, really loved your story, and I thought it was so well written. By the time I got to chapter 8, I was so depressed that the story was ending!

Your really very good at writing, thanks so much for posting! All the best,

~Indy