I would've loved to learn more on Jackson past and his fear of water is from. (I believe his parents died in the ocean). I would've loved to see more Peggy and Lisa/Melissa bromance. Also Jackson/Melissa more back ground. I would've loved where Jackson/Lisa had a kid. well done.

yay Jackson said that he loved Lisa too. I like that Lisa had a nightmare that Jackson was dead. I like that Lisa just needed to make sure Jackson was alive. I really enjoy it. I like that Lisa thought she imagine that Jackson spoke. I like that Lisa apologised and that Jackson told her not to feel guilty because she came back. I like that Jackson is okay. well done.

I love how Jackson is like Peggy's mum and was upset that he was drinking himself away. I really enjoyed the show down between Jackson/Quinn. I like that Jackson wanted to protect Lisa even if she didn't return to him. I like that Lisa finally admitted her feelings for Jackson. I know he is gonna survive of course but it still feels very intense. another enjoyable chapter. I really enjoyed the Jackson/Lisa interactions. well done.

wow so intense. I don't think That Quin would jump so quickly to saying Lisa love him just because she defenced him. I don't think that Quinn would have let his true self be know to Lisa. He would've I believe tried and act as the hero. I like that Melissa went on the plane with Lisa. I like the bromance between Melissa/Lisa. I hope we see more of it. I love that we learned a little about Melissa/Jackson's past. I like that Lisa/Melissa kept calling. I like how heart broken Jackson is, poor thing. I like that Lisa couldn't admit her feelings for Jackson yet. I like that Joe didn't want to let his daughter go but he had no choice. great work.

I don't know if I said before but I really enjoyed Melissa/Lisa scars and their understanding. I like that Lisa kissed Jackson first. and then Jackson kissed her back. Then Lisa kissed Jackson again. I like that Lisa was self-conscious about her scar. I like that Lisa canon balled into the pool. I like that Lisa is still afraid of him. I like that Jackson asked if Lisa wanted to call her dad. I like that Lisa said that Jackson was afraid too. I like that Brook wants Jackson dead. I like that Jackson knows that Brooke is after. I like that Jackson is letting Lisa go, o be with her father and be safe away from brooke. I like how Conflicted Lisa is between see her dad and staying with the man she loves. This is so exciting. really awesome. I like how Loyal Melissa is with Jackson. I still hope we learn more about them too. I like how Peggy/Melissa are shipping Jackson/Lisa hard. I really enjoyed it. well done.

Life can make you super busy. It's totally okay. Your writing for free, so you dedicating your free time to your stories, is brilliant. same goes for every Fanfic writer. well done.

wow I did think you could be allergic to strawberries. I've literally never heard of anyone being allergic to strawberries. Well hopeful you feeling a lot better consisting it's been over 7 years. :) awwww it's so cute. I love that Peggy/Melissa said that Jackson is in loved with Lisa. I like that Jackson let Lisa called her dad. I like the Jackson/Lisa interactions and how playful they are with one another. I like that Jackson said thank you to Lisa for not trying to leave. I like that Lisa said Thank you to Jackson for letting her call her father. I hope we get to read Joe's POV soon. I like that Jackson was really happy. I can't wait to read the pool scene. well done.

wow that was amazing. I like that Lisa is asking for a second chance. I love the Jackson/Lisa interactions. I reckon that Jackson's parents died out in the sea. and that is why it is very hard for Jackson to go into the ocean. I like that you used films instead of books. I like that Lisa took over Jackson movie room. and then asked if she wanted to go horse riding. I like that Jackson expected Lisa to leave and was bitter about it. I like that Lisa didn't leave. I like that Jackson named his horses after movie characters Aurora and stitch. I like that Lisa offer to dance with him in return for him putting his feet in the water. I like that Lisa went to drop Jackson jacket in the water and Jackson said that he would drop his pants. I like that they came to a truce. I like that dancing scene. awwww I'm going all weird. I like that Jackson asked if Lisa wanted to go in the pool with him. I like that Jackson is conflict with his emotions about Lisa. I hope we get to learn more on Jackson/Melissa relationship as well as peggy/Jackson's relationship. well done.

oohh I like how screwed up quinn is. I like his plan of action in getting Lisa. I like that phone call between Joe/Quinn. I love the Melissa/Jackson interactions. another awesome Chapter. I love the Jackson/Lisa interactions. I love that Jackson thought Lisa was drowning. I like that Lisa freaked out. I like that Lisa pushed Jackson head in the water and he did the same to her. I like that Lisa faked being drown. I like that Jackson started CPR on her and Lisa freaked out.(I laugh at that). I like that Lisa got Jackson. I like that Jackson threw Lisa in the pool. I like that Jackson gave Lisa his towel. I like that Jackson took the taser off Lisa balcony off. I like the relationship between Melissa/Lisa. I really reallly really enjoyed the Jackson/Lisa pool scene. well done.

I like that Jackson comment about Lisa trying to molest him. I laughed and I'm still smiling over it. I like that Lisa carried Jackson back. I like that how control Jackson is of Lisa, he definitely reminds me of beast. So the good cop is going to be Gaston. When did Lisa have Handcuffs put on her, I don't remember that scene and I'm binge reading your story. anyhow I really enjoyed the Jackson/Lisa interactions. I like that Lisa/Melissa interactions. This is so exciting. well done.

I like how you are using quotes. I like that Melissa was the one to bandage Lisa's arm. I like that Jackson hesitated when Melissa ask when he is gonna kill Lisa. I like that Melissa ships them. I like that Jackson hit Lisa and threw her in the bathroom. oohh this is so good. I like the painful cliffhanger you left it on. I like the Melissa/Lisa interactions. I like the last Jackson/Lisa scene. I like how Melissa is so keen on getting Lisa/Jackson together. I really enjoyed it. I like how Lisa refuses to give up. I like that Lisa doesn't trust Melissa. well done.

Why did they leave a witness behind? from the first chapter. Not very professional or smart. anyhow I like the Lisa/Jackson interactions as well as the Lisa/Melissa and Melissa/Jackson. I like that Lisa's father is alive and okay. I like that Lisa fought back and tried to escape. I like that Jackson is still in pain. I like Melissa put a blanket on Lisa. I like that Lisa got taser by the balcony. well done.

I like it. I also love Beauty and the beast, it's still my favourite princess story. I like that Modern aspects of it. I like that Jackson kidnapped Lisa dad. I like the woman, Melissa. I'm interested to see where you take this story. To be I doubt it's in character especially with Jackson. But I like that you combined two of your favourite things. well done. and understand that this is suppose to be just for fun. I really like it. well done.

Very cute. And, I'm glad she saw a hint of thr man she first met.

I don't like Melissa.