please write more stories for deidara and sasori pretty please with chocolate on top?

DON'T Tell me she's dead.

Where's Naruto? put Naruto and Sasuke together PLEASE! And include them in the story, since Sasuke is Ita's bro.

Dei will regret too...'cause he'll love him. Even though we all know the result, I'm very interested with the process.

It was too cliche and deidara fell in love too fast and too hard.
Deidara was overly ooc and could have been developed into such a better character :(
The grammar and spelling was an absolute mes too. And that was such a sad lemon seesh. He was "nice".
The story didn't live up to expectations.

I was hoping this would have more sasori torture. Like deidara make sasori do embarrassing things. I thought it was also a little cliche that Deidara gets kidnapped and raped. The beginning of the story was good but it could have been better. I also think you should Reread your work or get a beta.

Seriously, This is the most amazing story ever. Who cares if the ending notes are annoying? The plot is amazing, its a mix of funny, hurt, awww parts, and just KAWAII~ over all. grammer is okay but overall this story could win an award. Jashin blesss you.

Okay... So that was really sweet(: Love the story.

You are a very annoying bitch. Your ending notes are a piss-off.

But good story.

But you're still a bitch, bitch.

yeah... i dont like you.. you sound annoying. i've read better stories. *yawn*

HAVE YOU ABONDENED WRITING NARUTO STORIES?

YOU WRITE SOME OF THE BEST NARUTO HURT/COMFORT FICS EVER! Plase don't abandon it!

konan is evil, but rules. lol

this story sucks i mean seriously im not trying to be mean but the plot is sucky

maybe when deidara was about to fall or suicide you could have let him survive or something

I think the boy is Sasuke! Am I right? Do i get cookies? I promise ill share them with cookie monster!

Daww, I loved that story! Great job!