| Reviews for Harry and James |
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   LoneTraveler chapter 1 . 11/2/2019 This is an interesting story. On the one hand it's a fun premise to work with. Two things. Fictional universes have laws. When you break them to create your AU, the new laws need to make sense. I just don't see how the protection she gave Harry would work if she wasn't dead. It would be a common thing that lots of people would know about in the magical world of a person didn't die for that. Two. Harry seems to be handling this situation too well. Sure, he's the type to hold back his emotions, but this event is too major to hold back this much. A scene from Harry's point of view could make up for that deficit. He might allow himself to fall apart in a room while his wife is asleep. There can be other signs that he's not really okay. I can see this is Lily's story, but something needs to added because this event is too huge for Harry. |
| HarryPotterFangirl85 chapter 4 . 5/11/2019 Interesting |
| jonski chapter 4 . 9/3/2013 Lily without james is just so umimaginable...so unnatural...like taking a bath without soap or macaroni without cheese. |
| sanbeegoldiewhitey chapter 3 . 3/4/2012 You were not able to portray a Harry that should be overwhelmed with joy at seeing his supposedly dead mother is actually alive. He is too reserved when he should be brimming with happiness. |
| JoPoGirlsKickAss chapter 4 . 6/4/2011 Depressing, but good. |
| Penny is wise chapter 4 . 1/19/2011 Random but good |
| alice louise chapter 4 . 11/15/2010 I don't know what to say ... Bloody brilliant ! |
| kookookarli chapter 4 . 10/2/2010 you have no idea how sweet this is, i love it |
| serenityselena chapter 4 . 8/30/2010 awww ... so sweet... nice story _ |
| Hpfan chapter 3 . 8/15/2010 welll... liked it hate it how about loved it |
| Mr.WrestlemaniaXX chapter 4 . 7/31/2010 you now this great but you need to throw the old professors in this it would make it much more interesting |
| songoku778 chapter 4 . 7/31/2010 THIS WAS AWSOME KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK |
| Liyly chapter 4 . 7/22/2010 It's cute, but it has to be hard for Lily to wake up after 23 years with all her friends dead ! Liyly |
| Sugarplumjellygum chapter 4 . 7/19/2010 "Make it stop!" Teddy shouted. "Harry, can't you turn him off?" That's funny... Please say something about Ginny and Lily having the same hair colour when they meet! Loving this story! Update soon! |
| Louey06 chapter 4 . 7/18/2010 Good chapter i really liked it |
