Reviews for Milky Sunburn |
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jacoblover23 chapter 1 . 10/24/2015 cool story |
jacoblover23 chapter 1 . 10/24/2015 cool storu |
Shadowhunterlover 00 chapter 1 . 9/15/2015 Awwwwwwwwwwww! |
WritingMiss8 chapter 1 . 3/13/2015 That is really good to know when I get this chapter. |
Syndi-Dowell chapter 1 . 7/26/2013 That's so neat. :) |
edwardbella4ever chapter 1 . 7/21/2012 Great short story:) Thanks for the milk tip my sister will be thrilled she is VERY fair skinned! |
schleeshins chapter 1 . 7/15/2012 cute! . |
blueberrypie94 chapter 1 . 11/28/2011 Awesome! I've never heard of milk being a cure for sun burn, in NZ we use Aloe Vera gel or if we have a plant we slit the leaves open and rub in on our skin. |
Star chapter 1 . 11/26/2011 Maybe but I'd hate my body smelling like milk |
Noble Korhedron chapter 1 . 11/20/2011 Dare I ask if you're as hot as Cleoptra, 'cause you'll be channeling her bathing in milk - L.O.L! :-P |
Fleur24 chapter 1 . 8/1/2011 YAY charlie and Sue are married! I love how Leah imprinted and her and her imprint are living in Sue's old house. ""Renesmee was covered in red from head to toe. The poor thing was sunburn. The only thing that wasn't sunburn was where her bathing suit had been. She was crying as Edward set her down on the couch gently. "What happened?" I asked, going over to her. "Jacob forgot to put sunscreen on her, so she got burned at the beach. It's all on her back and front and her face," Edward growled. I could tell he was pretty mad that Jacob forgot to put sunscreen on her."" AWE poor Renesme! I know how bad that feels. HAHA Edward has go buy lots of milk. AWE! Such a sweet fluffy fic! |
Forever Cullen chapter 1 . 7/3/2011 loved it |
emmalsenior chapter 1 . 6/27/2011 Bloody love this story, its so good and realistic, loads of fluff and great writing, a fun enjoyable read! |
mediafanatic51 chapter 1 . 1/23/2011 great story. I like how you explained Charlie's marriage and not just have it be about a sunburn. |
c.taylor chapter 1 . 12/16/2010 ok so u kno that the Imprint Jean is RARE, in a pack member? like not EVERY member imprints, just so u kno. I mean like can't at least some of them fall in love the regular way? please I ask of you be a little more creative next writing? oh and I applaued u for not using too much Jacobnessie nonsense in this story! some times people go overboard |