just reread this wonderful story, it's been awhil, but still just as good as reading it the first time :)

Brilliant! Wonderful! Beautiful! I think you've captured the characters perfectly - their hopes, their fears, their angers and their insanities. This is the perfect story to read as my first Fringe fic. I can hardly wait until I'm further in the series to read the rest of them. Well done!

Well done. Olivia is starting to get a hang on her abilities. And Liv is lovable (and has been for a while now).

Well done!

You are so evil to bring them back together and then throw Olivia's doubt up as a barrier. It was to be expected, I guess, since we certainly can't have a happily-ever-after so quickly, but still...

And now Liv is in a van that is about to fall off a bridge. Naw, no lack of tension there.

How wonderful! She's home and (hopefully) safe. Yet, there is still Mr. Roboto on the loose, who may have more than just a recall assignment.

I love your imagery. I can easily see all of this in my head. Well done, as always.

I love the character you've turned Mrs. Bishop into. She was great in the show, but you've given her more depth. And alt-Olivia (Liv, I guess) has come over to the dark side. Or the right side. Or something.

Ok, the conversation between Olivia and Mrs. Bishop was heart-wrenching. I'm glad that you hooked her up with Bell (and now I'm interested to see if this is one of the things that the show does, too, once I finally get to S3).

I'm also interested to see how Peter's gonna subdue alt-Olivia. He's kneeling on her know, but the moment he gets off of her, she'll be up and moving.

Now, without reading ahead, I'm going to have to guess who the person who can help her is going to be. It can't be Bell, because he (possibly) blew up. But then, she doesn't know that, does she? So, I guess I answered my own question. Never mind.

Looking forward to the scene with Peter and alt-Olivia and whether he starts to suspect that she isn't his Olivia.

Very nice! You make alternate Olivia almost lovable, showing us how she's fighting to make sense of it all. With Peter finally deciding that he's going to confront alt-Olivia and Olivia-prime coming to a head with her power, it's gonna be a heck of a ride.

I had truly forgotten how wonderful and visual your writing can be. You completely sucked me in with Peter's dream - I was wondering how he could be so blind as to not realize that it wasn't *his* Olivia. Onward to chapter 2...

I can't believe that this fic is actually over!

The ending was awesome, and I can't wait to read more from you.

So, when you would change to Complete in the properties.

I was so happy to see this update! Sad it's over though, it was a great ride!

What an outstanding fic!

I couldn't stop until I finished it!

GREAT!