Oh so sad but thanks for the read

I loved it! Good job

Awww! Very good story. Jane needs a hug.

From Lisbon.

And maybe a kiss...

LOL good job!

Wow, you're good. I'm touched.

Awwe, poor Jane. Well not really :)

lilaclila

wow that was sad! but good! sad but good.:)

I'm glad that this didn't end in the fairy tale way.

Overall, not bad!

I really enjoyed reading it !

A bit heart-wrenching though ;) but really well-written.

...Would be really nice to have a follow-up...I'm just saying...!

Anyway, thank you for the good time !

This was so great! I love this song and always thought it would be good for them! I was going to write it myself but I could never come close to this! haha. I wrote something sorta like this-sad I mean- called Time. About them. I would greatly appreciate if you would read it and tell me what you think. Beautiful job!

Ouch. probably shouldn't have read this an hour before an exam.

That was brilliant :) maybe you could do a follow up fic...or something pre this fic like when he left :) I dunno but it was great anyway :)

Awh, Jenn finally wrote a saddening ending! I'm so proud. :)

Heart-breaking, almost. Tsk tsk. -shakes head- As much as I'd like to believe Jane wouldn't disappear like that after RJ is gone, he probably would. It's kind of depressing. D:

Second person is very intriguing! I quite like reading it. :O But anyway, this was really good. hehe

It's thundering right now and the dog is freaking out. I kinda want to kick her out of my room, but my mom made me promise to be nice to her. Why do dogs have to be afraid of thunderstorms? :( -endrant-

Ily.

I think that I'm about to cry. I know, I cry at 'Lilo and Stitch', but that was beautiful! So was 'Lilo and Stitch', but that's beside the point.

It makes me sad that they are not living happily ever after, but it's a scenario which is completely possible. If he left her behind, and abandoned her like her mother had, she would not let him back in her life, not to be hurt again. In this sense, it's really realistic.

The 2nd person was interesting to read, and you know immediately that Jane is 'you'. It added an angle to the story that 1st or 3rd wouldn't have, and in my opinion, it worked wonderfully.

I know what you mean about stories not leaving you alone... I have a Numb3rs one which I've had in my head for almost half a year now, but I don't think I'll ever actually get round to writing it. Thinking about it, is all that's left, I suppose. And the occasional dream...

I have homework to complete, even though it's Sport's day tomorrow - the worst day of the school year, including the first day back to school after Christmas - and I must be off. Nonetheless, I enjoyed this one very, very much and I'm looking forwards to either a new fic, or another chapter of 'Another Heart Calls'. Either or will do! :D

-Seven x x

AHH... That was a sad story, but really good. Made me cry. I hope you continue this and get them together.

It's incredibly sad but very well done. Good job ! ;)