Ahh , just another normal day in Ikebukuro Nice spice there ;]
Pretty funny fic and adorable too ! ;D

Aww Iza -san is getting jelly over a fish 3
Lul , cute fic . I feel a bit bad for Shizuo , all he wants is peace , but Izaya is just gonna keep on trollin ' xD

That was nice and.. hot 8DD!

awsome fanfic i agree shizou is just to idiotic to take advantage of izaya, izaya on the other hand is one of those guys who dominate (MALE) unlike shizou who is mor submisive.

poor shizuo, Izaya always does seem to provoke him so. but I have to admit it, I do luv it, I didnt know what yaoi meant but I seen one comic on the youtube about it and it rocks. You write well , and still managed to convey humor, and ya sexy too.

I loved it .

oh. my. god. are you serious? dude. PLEASE GO ON! nuuuuuuuu

i'm depressed it ended Q-Q

anyways, it was awesome while it lasted XD

the fluff was too short tho ; n ;

owell ;

nice job :)

Aw this was really cool, like everything put together :D

The aquarium scenes and those after, it was very uh..flowing? xD

And if you have fun writing it, you can be sure you make it right :3

I hope to read some more from you in future? :D

kyccu

ha! one more 'step' and it'll be a rated M fanfic! XD

nice story! I love the simple ending. keep up the good work~! X3

lol You get points just for making Izaya insanely cute, or is it cutely insane? It's so hard to tell with our adorable psychopath. I like how you included Simon too. He would get involved. I think with a bit more practise you could be an amazing author. I look forward to more stories from you in the future x

First things first, what in the world is with the story title? I mean, I get the 'Fish' part, but why 'Pink Fish'? Why not... 'Purple fish'? Teehee.

Secondly, awesome fic. I just loved Shizuo in this fic. I mean, do you really expect someone who is supposedly one of the most dangerous people to love playing innocently with innocent fishes? His reactions were AWESOME. And Izaya is as cheeky as ever.

~Kawaii-no-Kitsune

LOL! xD

You know, Simon looks like their father that try to separate them.

Yay! Kisu!

Waaah~~ What he will do? !

Waaah! This is too cute. I love how you portray them.

Will be waiting for more!

GHEEEEEEEEEEE~~~~ I SAW THIS PIC HURHURHUR, shizzy's innocence XD PURE WIN

HAHAHA, fave line "Ha, it's Shizu-chan. Oh? He's playing with a fish. The stupid ass. He should be playing with me."

ILU for making izaya so childish XD especially the bit about wanting his teeth to be sharper XD I was laughing my brains out through my nose!(that comment of mine didn't make sense lol)