| Reviews for GirlNapped! |
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   Vantes chapter 14 . 7/26/2017 2017 |
| Guest chapter 20 . 4/11/2015 I liked this only I wish that you would have let Sora fight since it was Sora who got his keyblade back from Riku originally, other than that it was good so far. |
| Guest chapter 17 . 4/4/2013 am only 11 and i like your story |
| Guest chapter 22 . 3/29/2013 i would like if u can make more also am only 12 and i like the story |
| ghgfj chapter 3 . 3/28/2013 there a cute couple |
| Boohbear19 chapter 1 . 1/11/2013 this is great! :) |
| PathethicalyInLove chapter 22 . 11/18/2012 Hey, just read your story. I had a nice time reading it and your plot was very well planned, plus your characters had a lot of personality with them. I'd like to give you some friendly advise though, I noticed you described a lot things that weren't as important and neglected others that were. Plus the situations your characters were in didn't often fit with the way they reacted, I mean after your sister is almost raped I doubt you'll smile at her and send her to bath... stuff like that. I think the interaction and the reality factor of your writing could improve, by making them have more real-life reactions and emotions. All in all, I really liked your story and I laughed a lot with Sora and Kairi moments, and Roxas and Namine's fights. Keep up the good work. |
| Soharu87 chapter 21 . 10/10/2012 WAIT. its a REAL pearl...? DEEPLY CONFUZZLED. but i ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT, so whatevs. (ps sorry for the caps, i know how some people dont like that, but it felt the need to express the awesomeness) |
| sokai4eva chapter 1 . 1/2/2012 I thought that was very sweet of young Sora :) I started to squeal xD |
| FrostFire15 chapter 2 . 12/17/2011 The southern accent is so annoying. I can't even continue reading your story. |
| Bammmie chapter 22 . 12/16/2011 this was really fun and i really love your fast updates!im sorry i didnt review on the other chapters... |
| only 12 chapter 21 . 11/8/2011 ... for life your story its really goood 3.i guess this is kinda like porn right? 4.I KINDA FEEL FUNNY out on the couch I LOVE ROXAS AND NAMINE EVEN MORE 7.i thought i was gonna puke up some chocolate cake STORY ROCKS GOT IT MEMORIZED? 9.i kinda felt like a perv is getting long... a very boring person 12.i like your pro file pic NUMBER this story was lovly but the weried talk was BAD sucks |
| MissOreoPie chapter 22 . 9/19/2011 I loved these stories, but every story has a end |
| melianthus chapter 22 . 6/23/2011 That was so beautiful. :tear: I absolutely loved it. :D |
| melianthus chapter 21 . 6/23/2011 I totally love your story. one question though. How could a pearl come out of her? |
