This story is so awesome! I read it a long time ago but felt the need to came back and read it again. I feel a bit bad for Draco at the end, tough, he tried to be nice in his own way :)

WHAT ARE YOU DOING TO HARRY POTTER? IT IS THE BEST SERIES EVER, but the fanfic is disgusting. Go write something good. This is not good.

god damn that was marvelous

Really a surprising story! I can see that, for Hermione, being allowed to give up control like this would be extremely appealing. She has to be so very much in control so much of the time - and always to perform at the utmost levels. This was really good, how she found a way to escape that.

And ah, Harry. Captain Romance, indeed.

Draco was really well done. Possibly my favorite Draco ever. (Granted, I haven't read Dramione fics...)

you do know kids read here the litttle letter M dont stop em

More more more. Stunning writing. I love it. Give us more H/Hr! please

This is just *fans self**. Something about Dominant Harry and Submissive Hermione just gets to me. When I was rereading the books, there were quite a few instances when Hermione acquiesed/bow to Harry or did her best to please him/help him or did something and looked to Harry for approval. It certainly wasn't sexual but Hermione's need for approval was there.

Great wrting. I've actually read this twice now. Hopefully you'll write some more H/Hr for me to lust over.

Happy writing!

Liked the ending, especially the fact that Hermione created a potion that could be used as part of their kink, or maybe it's just me being a pervert :-)

That was fantastic! This story was booby trapped for a writer, a ton of cliche's waiting to ruin it, and you avoided them perfectly! I particularly enjoyed the last bit from Draco's pov. )

Good story

Hope u do another chapter

Good story

Hope u do another chapter

Wow. You are a really good writer. I ran a search for stories involving Hermione, Draco, and a potion and stumbled across this - I don't know if I would have found it otherwise, but I'm glad I did.

I enjoyed the plot - it's not something I would ever have thought up, and every new twist was fascinating. You did well in allowing all of the characters to show interesting personalities, instead of just being placeholders to allow the plot you wanted to happen. The characters actually drive the story, instead of just being in it, which is something I don't usually see in fanfic. I like the details you put in, like Snape's inner thoughts, Muggle movies, and interactions with minor characters who have no idea what's going on between D, H & H. I also like that you didn't dump on other characters just because you didn't like their canon pairings and you didn't make them caricatures of one of their traits. Your dialogue, of course, is very good.

Enjoyed it fully!

Oh how I adore this story. You have captured the characters so well, the angst and longing are just brilliantly done. I don't often read H/Hr, but this is one love triangle that I will happily go back to time and time again. Well done.

Bravo, bravo, encore. This is the first bit of erotic fanfiction I've read that makes me appreciate the potential of doing it as fanfiction rather than as generic erotica.

Wonderful. Simply wonderful! A great blend of humor, canon, OOC, romance, and some of that ever-enjoyable well-written smut!

I have to particularly with the review citing the beginning, middle, and end as the best parts D