Holy heck, these random interjections are making this unbearable.

The random bold comments really break down the fluidity of this story...

Called it!

I'm going to go ahead and guess that Vlad is the backer.

Poor Danny.

I like the commentary, btw, it feels very muppetish. Would be better at the end of the story though, rather than interrupting in the middle.

i love the story but the romance makes me want to puke. yeah, im not a big romance fan, especially with all this lovey dovey type.

Waldorf and Statler are seriously going hardcore on this and they just gets meaner and meaner
Also why is Waldorf talking about Airplane Attendants being gorgeous if he has a wife

I think Quill is an amazing writer and how he put this into perspective was great

Plus, so far, it seems like this could actually happen in an episode. None of the character are really OOC.

But it is 2016 now so I guess it doesn't matter

Well, I greatly enjoyed this story! The Cap’n was a FUN character & Chad was pretty cool, too. The commentary between Statler & Waldorf was hilarious, if a bit repetitive. I don’t even want to think about how many different times they fell back on ‘This story is bad…’ I’m a LITTLE disappointed that you didn’t show Chad meetin’ up with 1 of his ancestors in Aragon, though…

Speaking of which; while epic, your story seems to have a few problems that I feel obliged to point out. The regent in the Kingdom of Aragon is Dorathea & it confuses me that Dora didn’t turn into a dragon, even once, in the Final Battle. If I remember correctly, Pandora was the multi-armed lady that lives in the Acropolis with all the other fantastical creatures of Greek Mythology. I’m sorry if I come across as nitpicky, but I wanted to just point these facts out in case you ever write another story for the Phandom.

These discrepancies, in NO WAY, take away from the quality of your work.

I know this is a bit old, being 5 years later, but I still would like to give my thoughts on Chapter 1. For the most part, I do like it. My only concern is Mr. Lancer. I understand that adding on the responsibilities of Hero and Ghost Hunter, on top of getting his education and maintaining good grades, I'd thought Mr. Lancer would expect more from Danny not to let his "world saving" interfer with his academics.

Mr. Lancer can be sympathetic, it is cannon that he is and has proven to be so (mainly in season 1 episode 12, Teacher of the Year).

Maybe for tests or Exams, I can see "extension" being afforded from time to time, but as Lancer once said, There are no short cuts or cheat codes in life. Not everyone lives or experiences things the same way. Some have bigger burdens than others, but that shouldn't mean they get "special privileges".

I HATE YOU TWO

Please stop putting in so many weird commentary things...thanx :)

Get them out of there

Amazing story, best Danny Phantom fanfiction I've EVER read, tons of detail, and Statler and Waldolf are radical! Thank you so much Quill for bringing this story into words, it's one word: amazing

Great chapter! I plan on writing my own Danny Phantom stories that take place after Phantom Planet.

To Waldork and Statler the two of you are low lass jerks who would not know good writing if it slapped them in the face. So keep your opinions to yourself and SHUT THE F*** UP!