| Reviews for Flawless |
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   Dubsteven chapter 3 . 10/31/2018 Everytime I read this I've got the biggest smile on my face. You convey Toris emotions really well, especially in the last bit. |
| anonmous chapter 3 . 11/23/2017 ugh |
| Andrea P. Lancer chapter 1 . 9/13/2015 It was hilarious and I love it with a kind of guilty but... I love it anyway |
| anonymous chapter 3 . 9/5/2015 ewwww |
| Hh chapter 1 . 3/21/2015 Nyc but badType |
| Dubsteven chapter 3 . 3/11/2014 I enjoyed that way too much... I don't actually mind incest (especially between sisters) it's mostly hot... great story :) you could write another chapter, even though you don't need to, I'd appreciate it. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/25/2014 ki |
| Cotto chapter 2 . 12/1/2013 Enjoyable rape is still rape! Tori, having been raped by Trina should call the cops on her sister! Isn't their dad a cop? He should hear about the forced incest that happened under his roof- both because the participents are his children and because he's a (it seems) police officer! Jade is a real lady in this story, she genuenly asks Tori (whom she hates) if she's OK. Great story! |
| Cotto chapter 3 . 12/1/2013 Darn right that Mrs. Vega wouldn't be pleased with Trina if she learned Trina had raped Tori! When Tori is like 'Gulp NO!' I can agree with her for that (and most of the story) she really would be scared of her sister- though she would literally want to love Trina, and not see her as a threat to her purity!- she's probably scared Trina will rape her again! Trina is clearly sick in this story and (I'd say) needs to get arrested! |
| Go Hump an Oven chapter 3 . 9/6/2013 *one cold shower later* I um...think this story needs just a little more... |
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/30/2013 I have to say the only thing that bother me was your disclaimer. Why write something you are ashamed of writing? If anything you should be writing for yourself and love your work |
| Ry ry chapter 3 . 8/3/2013 Sexy story loved it |
| darkfinder chapter 2 . 6/27/2013 surprised didn't ask for any thing . |
| darkfinder chapter 1 . 6/27/2013 fun stuff . |
| J chapter 3 . 5/9/2013 3 |
