Beautiful, languid, intriguing to see an oddly gentle Glorfindel in a way.
"I am not standing by the water's edge.." haunting

Thank you for it

Really good. One part bothered me: the use of the word "technically". Maybe try "strictly speaking" or "in fact." The us of technically feels too modern.

I love this story so much. :3

That was a good read! I like the positive ending, and of course your description of closeness and light.

Sweet, subtle, and soft.

Well done.

I like this paring..

Not my usual..but you are very convincing!

You have such a beautiful way of writing.

aw how sweet

Okay, I found already that I fail to express how thankful I am... but thank you, so much...

The story is wonderful! It just beams at me, the sunlight seeping from the words straight into my imagination. It's great, the way you do it, the way you have written them two... the whole atmosphere of pure happiness and calm, the contented presence. It's the perfect longing closed in the words. It's a projection of perfect happiness, of which we dream being with the other person.

And white roses... the small rose plant behind that fence surely does not know he has been graced with such a blessing... but I'm going to tell him one day. I am sure I wasn't there the one and only time in life.

Thank you.

May you find only joy in your life.

Words fail me at how touching I found this. It really seems that you know these characters intimately, and the fact that they are side characters makes this all the more wonderful for me. Thanks for sharing!

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