Aw man, that was so sad. ;_;

I'm crying so hard right and this is so beautiful you are amazing omigod tears please sto

Why did you make me cry? -Sobs in the corner- NOOOOO POOR MATTIE!

Wow! That was very impressive. The complexity of their roles to each other as brothers as well as their individual characteristics was shown here really nicely in a dark and twisted way. Great Job!

Amazing story~ made me cry

I read this story a long time ago, but only just recently did it come back to 'haunt' me. It was actually one line in this beautiful story, and it's actually in your summary! 'Not everyone wants to be saved' I think it is. That line is the second last one in a play I wrote for drama, and seeing this story just made me want to tell you how inspirational you have unknowingly been :D

This was eerie and beautiful and god, so sad on so many levels. I love the interplay, how Matthew's invisibility is just that - invisibility, because he's imaginary. He's dead, poor Matthew, but Alfred can't let him go and it's driving him insane. So psychological...I can't really explain it, but this touched me in a deep way. Thank you so much for sharing this.

N-No, that wasn't bad! It was actually really good! One of your best, if I do say so myself, and I do. It took me so long to finally read it though...it was just sitting there in my favorites, screaming at me until I was finally bored, and I'm glad I did finally read it. :)

It's so strange and vague, just like your other stories I've read. But I really do like it (despite the buckets loads of angst).

mah nah huminah ha?

y-you can't just end it there? O_O

Oh...another one of these? Another these hat makes me shake and my breath come out in short pants and makes me want to cry?

That entire dialogue, with Matthew and Alfred, about how Al loved Mattie because he filled the role that he needed him to play...that was beautiful, that was so beautiful. It was...horrible, like blunt truth horrible, and it made me cry because it was so true. Why so true? Why did it feel like every word hit home with Americas character? So horrible...so wonderfully horrible...

You...damn. Seriously I love you and your stories. You really bring something wonderful and unique to the Hetalia fandom. Each of your fanfics presents a new side to Matthews character, shows hidden complexities and different aspects of it from multiple POVs. I may have to refer back to these when I start a serious Hetalia fic that I'm planning. And in this particular fic, you also did it with Alfred. So wonderfully did you do it with Alfred.

You...ah~ I'm sorry, I'm crying because his fic managed to touch me so much. It just hit a chord...it wasn't even Matthew dying, it was...everything else. His explanation of Als hero complex, Als hallucinations of him, their relationship, how they were brothers but were lovers...

I don't know how you managed to pack so much into so little but...you did. You really did.

Oh...another one of these? Another these hat makes me shake and my breath come out in short pants and makes me want to cry?

That entire dialogue, with Matthew and Alfred, about how Al loved Mattie because he filled the role that he needed him to play...that was beautiful, that was so beautiful. It was...horrible, like blunt truth horrible, and it made me cry because it was so true. Why so true? Why did it feel like every word hit home with Americas character? So horrible...so wonderfully horrible...

You...damn. Seriously I love you and your stories. You really bring something wonderful and unique to the Hetalia fandom. Each of your fanfics presents a new side to Matthews character, shows hidden complexities and different aspects of it from multiple POVs. I may have to refer back to these when I start a serious Hetalia fic that I'm planning. And in this particular fic, you also did it with Alfred. So wonderfully did you do it with Alfred.

You...ah~ I'm sorry, I'm crying because his fic managed to touch me so much. It just hit a chord...it wasn't even Matthew dying, it was...everything else. His explanation of Als hero complex, Als hallucinations of him, their relationship, how they were brothers but were lovers...

I don't know how you managed to pack so much into so little but...you did. You really did.

-sniff- This was so great it touched my heart and I love it I just do and I love you too! -drags you out of your Cave of Shame-

~Icy-chan

I was a bite confused with the constant scene change but it was a fun fic to read :)

*drags outta shame cave*

BUt i love eeeeeeeeet~!

:D