Roy was totally being an ass. I am glad (kinda sadistic huh...) that he is feeling pain now that he hurt Edward that way.

Wow, Roy is such a bastard in this! I hope he gets what he deserves for being so awful to poor Ed!

Great chapter! I love it! Kira, Roy is such a bastard in this yet I still love him and feel sorry for him and Edward... keep writing! _

this is extremely extremely interesting and i must say i can not wait for the next chapter 8]...

Wow! This has such a sophisticated style yet such a realistic narration!

And the love/relationship is so much more believable than the typical "I love you" and "Hey, what do you know, I love you too" scenario.

I can't WAIT to see where this goes. Please UPDATE soon! And PLEASE don't kill Ed! _

Boring? BORING? you must be kidding me! that was awsome! I love this story, you are an amazing writer! please update soon! -meanwhile, I'm reading your other stories-

And I think you should at lest try writing actual yaoi, because I think you are very good writer and you got the skills, so... why not trying something knew?

wow... long review... -SWEATDROP- _''

keep writing and update, I'm waiting! 0

Yay edxroy and yet not edxroy!

I wuv u.

Aaaaand I need to find an actual computer and log in...

SO THAT I CAN PUT THIS ON ALERT AND ALSO FAV IT!

oh jeez roy, you just ripped the poor kid's heart out and stepped all over it. *wacks him on the side of the head*

now that im done making the bastard feel all bad i just wanted to say love the fic

Update please! That would be lovely! I rather like this one! So yes please please please continue! Oh and don't kill Ed. Roy and I would cry.

Can't wait for the next chapter! :D message back please! C8

Humm, this could have been in a flashback scene in the middle of this war or something alike.

By the way. there's something bothering me since that previous chapter. Careful with the narative person. For as long as I could see, it is supposed to be Roy's POV, but you slip into third person for no reason here and there. It would be better if you set all the chapter at one point of view only, or change it propely (although I dislike that either). You see, it don't make you fic bad, just that it could be better. Try it, just for once. It will be better!

And now that you are free from school, write more! .

Atsuko Uehara

Oh wow. Can't wait for more! And btw it seems more like a strategically placed cliffhanger more than a filler so no probs there! And I'm sure I've said this alot already but GAHH! Roy is sooo thickheaded, just like every other man around me right now. It seems to be a theme as of late x3x

PLEASE! UPDATE! SOON! BYE... :D

so... next chapter? D

This fic looks like it has a lot to show and I am willing to see it all!Update as soon as you may! I'll be waiting!

Atsuko Uehara

wow poor ed.