WHOO-HOO GO SODA!

! How cuuute! Anderson's in loooove! Let's see some LEMONY GOODNESS!

well done.

I am intrested in your story. I love Anderson FFs, he is my fav

so I hope, you are going on very soon?

I would write more to this chapter, but I think I am not able to judge about your spelling style or the plot because its the first chapter.

But you have convinced me, I want to keep on reading, thus please hurry up ;-)

P.S.: english is not my mothertongue, so please skip my spelling mistakes!

At least: Very nice work!

I love how I get to read these first~ This one is amazing-sauce too!

Want to read more, plz! I love it!

This is so cute~

This is so much better than the roleplay.

Hey, don't tell Lindsey about this, bring Inu in, and have Seras shoot her.

In the face.

Seventy-two times.

Exactly.