I think you’ve done a good job of handling the concept. It’s really not very clear to me what’s actually happening in the world; which works perfectly as it’s told so much from Alex’s point of view and he’s – as is pointed out – insane. The sunshipping makes sense if you take that into account.

Nice story. I like it. Good job. Keep writing. :)

I absolutely enjoyed reading this, though rather short and I would love seeing even more of chapters even though it's perfect as a oneshot. either way a marvelous read with every detail.

I don't like this story.

But... with my personal opinion aside, your story is very well written and descriptive. You handled everything very well and you obviously have some talent as a writer.