Beautiful. I was reading candor and had was severely dissatisfied with the ending I wanted to see if there was any fanfiction on the book (I was surprised there was only 4 because the ending was perfect for a imaginative fanfiction writer) and now that I've read this I feel slightly better about it.

Yes. This should have been the ending. after EVERYTHING already happened that is. Or it should be the beginning of a sequel

ALL THE YES

This is perfection. I legit love you for this. I am just gonna pretend *this* is how the book actually ended :)

Ok I loved it, mainly because it just gave me hope for the whole thing,i mean seriously, it just seems so depressing to leave him like a newborn baby with his creper dad! I just finished reading the book 2day and almost screamed at the ending,then while looking through reviews 4 other books i found a link to fanfiction and tada your ending or begining or whatever was there and it was great. so yeah, good job

You should write more :)

this is good, i like it.

Thank you for this(:

Finally! I just got done reading Candor and the ending made me SO mad! I looked up Candor Fanfic to find a alternative ending. This is exactly what I was looking for. GREAT ending! :)

I just finished this book and also thought the ending was unfair yet tragically brilliant. This cheered me up a bit. Thanks!

I like this story so please update! Candor is so sad, so if you are a fan like me I will happily talk about it with you!

Awww! I agree. The ending of this book...pfft. Ridiculous. I was gonna write a story for this a while back, but I can't remember my idea...

Anyhoot! Tis fabulous, and I'm glad you wrote it! :)

hellooo you should totally keep reading! you're ending is about as much of a cliffhanger as the actual books! :)

i didnt like how the book ended eather, and i luved this ending :)

I sincerely hope that you continue to write more chapters. Personally I love Candor and though the ending was just as thrilling and beautifully written as the rest of the book, I felt as though there should be more to it. If the author doesn't deliver this then at least some Candor fanfics will suffice.

It's wonderfully done btw.

Chocoholicgirl

YES! This made me feel so much better than the original ending . now nia shall come all ninja style and save oscar from his idiot father and the town.