Oh, poor Aang! I just feel so bad for him! The little guy didn’t deserve it that way, but I guess I can’t really think of a softer way to have let him down. I definitely like the ship! It’s decidedly new, and I like the “opposites attract” nature to it. Keep up the good work! Archer out.

Wow, I was REALLY liking tis story...until you said sokka broke up with suki. Um, that's kind of impossible, so yeah. Sukka would NEVER break up. They're just too perfect together. Like, super duper trooper perfect together.

Great story, with an interesting little twist at the end!

Awesome! Just wish there was more... :( It was such a great story!

I have this habit of only reading completed stories, so if this just randomly pops up forever after, sorry. Haha (:

You know, I toootally ship Zutara like...forever. But they feel so...out if character for me. And there was no wait period. It just feels waaaay too rushed. And at this point in the story, they've been together for what? A few weeks? Marriage seems so silly to be talking about sooo soon in a relationship. I find myself wanting desperately to slap Zuko for being so...not Zuko. He broods, he shouts, he gets angry. He embodies passion of the extreme, while Kutara is passion fluidly. They're both hot-headed, strong willed, and neither would have stood for half the things said to them so far.

Do not get me wrong, you have good writing and your story is forming well. I suppose my only criticism is that, when writing a story of characters so clearly defined already, letting them fall out of character let's readers become disillusioned.

There's my tidbit! I hope you keep writing because you are good at it, and constructive criticism helps everyone in the end.

:D

A nice cap on the whole crazy adventure! And, whatever the reason, a bit of Ty Lokka is always sweet.

Great little epilogue for a great story. I always enjoy your Zutara stories.

WOW this was a great story

Nice job :)

...Well, heck. Things feel wrapped up and yet not, all at once. I guess that's the way things go, though it feels like we may never be sure about everything that happened with Azula and/or Ozai.

Good for Katara, averting a bittersweet ending!

I cant wait to read the next chapters c: Its beautiful so far.

Awww so sweet got to love a dorky Zuko and a no nonsense Katara

awesome job :)

I am so excited for the next chapter!

I liked it. I liked so many things that I couldn't possibly name them all in this tiny review box.