This is absolutely beautiful! It's just so bittersweet and heart-wrenching... And everything is written in such a delicate way! I love it!

Ah! This was so good! Wasn't expecting this at all. I was so sad when the 4th chapter wasn't as short as the others, but then I realized it was an epilogue. The writing is so smooth and the characterization is right on! It made me feel bittersweet reading this. Thanks for writing such a great story! I thoroughly enjoyed this!

Spazz! This was so well written! I'm serious and the poem was absolutely lovely.

Extraordinary job!

Stella xx

My heartstrings! This story tugged at them like you wouldn't believe. Had me all wibbly at the end. :)

ALxMEI.

YES.

FINAAAALLLYYYYY! *madman laugh*

Dang.

That's easily the saddest thing I have read in a long, long time. Made my insides hurt it was so sad :(

But good job.

Sorry that I'm just reviewing on this chapter. I don't review stories very often. This chapter had me in tears by the end of it. It's very well written. Does the lullaby in this story actually exist? Because if it does, I can't seem to find it. Can't wait for the epilogue.

I was able to keep a straight face throughout the whole thing.

Then, as I read the last sentance, I started sobbing.(In fact, I'm still crying as I right this.) It was so beautiful. I absolutely love it and can't wait to read more.

Whooot! Nobody talks about Edward like that! Go Al! Really cute and heart warming. What's the next chapter about?

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