I really enjoined this! Thank you! It really reminds me of 92: thirty two miles an hour in how he blurts out marry me, after a long day. I laughed so hard when it was like, she wasn't just any other girl-and apparentally even a marriage proposal would not come between his fiancée and her sleep.

Ahhhhhh! This is so cuteeeeee :) I love it.

awwwwww!

This is absolutely amazing! Really well-written and so cute :D

aww, this was adorable. Loved it!

So much excessive shit

You know, most of the time I don't like percabeth marriage stories or proposals, but this was great. I think it's kinda cheesy when Percy does this big speech and has everything planned out. That's what I liked about this one. Percy hardly even knew what he was doing. And then all he says is, "marry me." Is just so perfect, because it's so simple. It's like he's saying, "Obviously we're getting married. No questions asked." And I like how he's a little pushy sorta, because he just says it and doesn't make it a question. He's saying "we ARE getting married. Absolutely."
In shorter words, I like it!

Love it! Make a sequel please!

Ah, the last guest review was me...I forgot to log in on my phone. Sorry :) either way you're an amazing author and I love this story!

AHHHH SOOOO GOOD! IM OBSESSED!

imma gonna laugh if he does get smited, er, smouted, smooted, smeeted, ooh! smeegle! *robin: not again! facepalm*

Oooh, it was so sweet !

I totally agree with you that Percy wouldn't make some overromantic proposal (it just wouldn't be...Percy then ;)) and do it spontanious without planning his words.

I really don't know how people can let him do that,

so yours was THE BEST PROPOSAL STORY EVER !

I really enjoyed reading it !

This made me happy. :)

Aw! That was so sweet! )

This is really good! Percy here is captured just right! I usually don't read fluffy Percy Jackson fanfics but I'm glad I read this one.