It feels very inappropriate for you writing LOL in your author notes ... I mean the subject matter doesn't need suddenly having LOL thrown in.

Seriously you should've just written long chapters instead of short to medium chapters. I mean your plot is all about the horrors of rape ... you would still have the full impact if you wrote long chapters ... and I'm sure the story would have need up being 30 to 40 chapters instead of 77 chapters.

I love the story ... just wish the chapters weren't so chopped at the end.

Interesting choice that you chose the male in the wheelchair that Rachel feels safe with. So it's uncomfortable to allow the gay male for Rachel to feel safe withyet the male struck in the wheelchair is okay?

Nope. Sorry but this is wrong.

Mike Chang should've been the male that Rachel felt safe with.

Now THIS is the Santana that I like. Wish RIB allowed the writers to always write her this way. This Santana I fully understand why people were always were drawn to her.

Instead we got jerk and backstabbing Santana Lopez 99% of the time.

Too bad that's the Santana Lopez that is always in my minds eye. Too bad that whenever they decide to do a "Glee" reunion that Naya won't be able to come back and try to be the Santana Lopez that you wrote.

RIP peace Naya Rievia ... sorry that you had to play such a horrible character.

What about Tina and Kurt's and Quinn's and Finn's pov or thoughts. Will cedes and artie eventually be besties with rachel?

Good luck, Charlie... lol couldn’t help myself. Good story... I read this in a day and I usually don’t stick around past the 30th chapter (adhd) so this story is incredible... good job

I was rereading this story... and while it's beautifully written I think implying that not having an abortion after being raped is the "right" thing to do... is disgusting. Maybe I'm taking the context wrong, and you meant that she's trying to do what she thinks is the right thing to do... I think the insinuation is pretty clear...

As I finish this it makes me wonder if I finished it when I read it last time. As soon as I started it I remembered like the fist 1/3-1/2 I knew who attack Rachel but as I just read the last chapter I didnt remember it. Anyway great story! Now on to the sequel :)

You should've just put this in with last chapter.

I read this story. Idk probably years ago at this point. And idk if it’s my mindset atm or what but like idk this story seems entirely different.

Yes Please

awwww poor rachel and quinn

Now onto Nationals!

Ill be honest, I skipped over most of this chapter. The rapid, sudden scene changes were ridiculously annoying. Not the fact that they were happening, but that they were happening without notice. One second Puck would be saying something at home with the house scene and everything going on in my head, then without warning Im reading something that Shelby is saying (and Ive read half of what she has said before I reach ", Shelby said" which is very confusing.

Something to separate paragraphs is needed, whether its extra paragraph spacing or something like "..." in between lines.

I wont let it ho without saying though that im loving this story!

Hiram and LeRoy