Reviews for Becoming the Enemy
Jesuslovesyo chapter 10 . 5/10/2019
best story ever
Fihi chapter 10 . 9/24/2018
I really don't expect you to continue this although hope is hard to kill. I do want to say that I enjoy this story very much. Shredder is messed up in every shape and form. Where this is going I wonder if Raph will even recognize himself for long. Although let's hope Splinter's lessions become successful in time.
Guest chapter 10 . 1/31/2018
Hey, this story is amazing & it's never too late to finish it...so please do! I liked it in 2012 when I commented about liking the similarities to Yeerks, & I like it now! Please consider giving us at least an outline of what you had planned & how this ends!

Thanks & ️s,
Longing for Leo
Shades of X chapter 10 . 12/27/2016
Now this is an amazing story!
I hope that Raph can overwhelm the Shredder, but it doesn't look too good.
Are you still going to continue this?
hi chapter 10 . 12/8/2016
very freaky, but good
Simgr101 chapter 10 . 1/29/2016
woulda been nice if you continued this fic, its good but alas what can you do
rookblonkorules chapter 10 . 7/7/2015
Oh, please finish this!
rookblonkorules chapter 1 . 7/5/2015
Do you read Animorphs? The Shredder getting into Raph's head it totally like the Yeerks!
I'm a HUGE Animorphs and TMNT (particularly Raphael) fan and this (possible unintentional) combo of the two is A-W-E-S-O-M-E!
I can't wait to see how this ends and please complete it otherwise I will be doomed to forever working out a solution to the problems introduce in this story within my head.
Agent B Tiger chapter 10 . 5/14/2015
Dunno if you're ever gonna finish this-I mean, it's been over two years-but I'd be interested in reading it if you did. The Yeerkness is freaking me out! In a good way...
Longing for Leo chapter 10 . 4/29/2015
Can we get this story finished nooow? Because I've been reading it since you started back in 2010 and I'd really hoped that it would be complete by now. I'd settle for a rough outline even. :) I seriously love the whole yeerk vibe (I think I said that a couple years ago) and even more so now that we're all waiting for the new Dark!Raph episode next week (that's what reminded me to go back to your story and see if it was finished). So hey, maybe throw us another chapter or two? Please? :D
Guest chapter 10 . 2/16/2015
patiently waiting for an update!
flikaroo chapter 10 . 2/11/2015
I really enjoy stories that tie into 2003 episodes and this one does so brilliantly. The insights into Raph and Ch'rell's thoughts are spot on. I hope you will have the time to finish this tale sometime.
Babymamhu chapter 10 . 12/18/2014
More please! PLEAAAAAASEEEE! I just read all your stuff, and WOW! Blown away. I like your stuff cuz it's dark and angsty but has good endings. I especially loved Send in the Clowns. That one was phenomenal. So please please pleeeeeaaaase finish this one! TT_TT
L chapter 10 . 12/1/2014
Awe please update! I need to know what happens it's really good
TJHECTOR chapter 10 . 11/14/2014
I know you might not continue this, but I wanna tell you anyway: this is very interesting! I want to know how this ends! You've done a great job! I absolutely love how you describe the abstract mental thing-Splinter's meditations actually. So if you got a chance or a vacation or something, I hope you finish this story, if it's possible. Thank you for sharing the story with us!
Best regards,
Hector
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