This is so well written, so powerful. Great fic.

I think I'll have to read it again to get it all, but I love what I do get. xD It seems really like the Master, in a half-insane, half-just-crazy kind of way. Is the other solar system thing canon at all?

Ooo! Aietradaea likesies extended metaphors! You've kept this one up very convincingly, I must say - and kept it fresh throughout. Still, must put /some/ constructive criticism - some of your sentences were SERIOUSLY long! I get that it's meant to be stream-of-consciousness style, and to a point, it works well for that. But that section that said "-the drums-" a couple of times - that's over 150 words, and I found myself wanting to take a breath in my head reading it!

The bit about the half a galaxy that the Master conquered was nice. Light, amusing... :)

Keep writing!