I wonder how much more plot you had originally planed out. Seems like the biggest issue to solve would be the mafia-thing. I guess we will never know.

Oh, I like a lot! Are you going to finish this fic, or are you discontinuing it? I only read the one chapter but I do plan to read the rest. Thanks for the reads! Please continue to write for us all.

Amazing! This is simply amazing

is this story abandoned? if so its an injustice to this amazing story. i rally hope you continue it, or put it up for adoption.

OMG! Can't believe you haven't updated this story 'cause its amazing. I love it. You should totally update it.

Loved it

love it,,,,,

I remember reading this a long time ago. It's sad that you won't be continuing this considering it's been years, but I just want to tell you I enjoyed reading this.

I really hope you will continue this! It was incredible :D I am loving your stories right now! :D

I see it has been a while since you updated but I do hope you continue this! :3

goood

Man, that was a good read.

This fic is...I don't know...ROMANTIC and SEXY.

Very Sexy.

Tsk, I'm am hating myself right now...I mean, why did I only discover this fic now? Why only now? I've been looking for an author like you for a long time now, and...*Sighs*

I just... I love THIS story.

I just love your stories. Period.

I understand that you are on hiatus, and I am willing to wait patiently for the next installment for a fic as perfect as this. I don't care if you'll update this in the next five years or ten or twenty (LoL), as long a you will not abandon this fic or leave us hanging, waiting for you.

Man, you write awesome, and your stories are sexy, and cool, and amazing, and...

Okay, I'm going to shut up now...('-.-)

So, good luck.

:)

It is a very nice story. Your writing style is nice and easy to read. If only Narutoo was not a girl with man's parts. Otherwise for a man he is very pathetic and very out of character.

Hey this is an awesome story, very well written! I really hope you decide to continue it!

I've had this story in my bookmarks for the longest of times, but never really came back to read it.

A few days ago, I was in my room with the Boredom Syndrom, and decided to look at my bookmarks for anything good to read so I could kill some time before I left for work and came across your story, wondering if I have ever read it. I decided I should check it out and I'm glad I did, heh, heh!

This story of yours is beautiful in so many ways. Sasuke in this isn't as much of a prick as he actually is, and that amuses a lot. I like him a lot in this.

Thanks for sharing this wonderful story and hope you continue when inspiration befalls you.

Great work, Miss.