| Reviews for Not On Your Own |
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   A ShrinkinG VIOLET GIrL chapter 9 . 3/2/2017 sweet moments |
| JENTWCSINYFAN2 chapter 10 . 7/20/2016 Ok wow where was I for this story. All of it is so good seriously .. |
| onetreefan chapter 10 . 11/20/2010 awww sweet story :) |
| storylover18 chapter 10 . 7/16/2010 ABSOLUTLY LOVED IT. It was awesome. sweet. incredible. adorable. i'm running out of synonyms for awesome. Anyways, great work! Keep writing. |
| carez123 chapter 1 . 6/2/2010 This is good so far, but when speaking, quotation marks go like this: "He couldn't help but laughed at her own correction. "Well isn't that a sign to go to the doctors?" He heard her sigh, her mind obviously trying to think of another reason not to go. "See... I'll go with you baby girl." "I can go to the doctors on my own," she argued back, she was an adult after all. "Can you book it on your own?" he quipped, a hint of sarcasm and concern in his voice. "I'll book it now," she said, defeated. "Just to make you happy."" I also made some other meaningless, minor corrections, but don't worry about them. To get the double quotes, push the shift key and the quotation at the same time. I really like this, though! |
| csimesser1 chapter 10 . 6/1/2010 That was great |
| DerrBear chapter 10 . 6/1/2010 AWE! what a great story! :) YAY |
| emzypemzy chapter 10 . 6/1/2010 Aha that was FAN-bloooming-TASTIC! Emily was right, Isabella Morgan is the best kid! Such a cutie! Loved that the tables had turned adn Morgan was now in need of TLC! And ice cream ;) And another ickle bickle Morgan baby on the way! Can you say awwww? I can! 8D Brilliant story mon ami - WUVED IT start to finish :)) |
| chatana chapter 10 . 6/1/2010 Really fabulous. I love this story very much. I hope the next chapter will come quickly, because I can hardly wait for later. ANYWAY- a very delicious chapter! fantastic, can not wait to read more really heartfelt love is so great that I can restrain myself to read and reread your history. Please also much more I'd like to have two chapters much more for tonight because I can not wait to read anymore. is too much fun that I'm waiting. Please heartfelt 2 more chapters for tonight please. Hopefully there will be several new chapter for today ... because I love that story, I'm really a fan. Bravo More, more, much more Chapter. Bravo Applause! I hope I can read much more today. Please much for today because I love and I just can not do without. Please two more chapter for tonight please from my heart I ask. Two more chapters for today |
| loveforpenandderek chapter 10 . 5/31/2010 smart way to end it their child was adorable |
| celticstarwolf chapter 10 . 5/31/2010 aww such a sweet ending hon really loved it thanks for sharing this one |
| enchantedfey chapter 10 . 5/31/2010 Awww, I'm not a shipper for these two but it caught my eye and i managed to mainline it all just a bit ago! Imagine my happy surprise to see that you'd posted an ending to it :) Very nice, they all stayed in character and yet still managed a nice dollop of the sweet and schmoopy that I would expect from them LOL. |
| Kathy0518 chapter 10 . 5/31/2010 Thanks for sharing Great story :) |
| PinkAngel17 chapter 10 . 5/31/2010 Hehehe, that was so cute! Absolutely great! And very sweet ending! Loved it! :) |
| Kimd33 chapter 10 . 5/31/2010 I love the ending |
