Good start! Would you guys continue this one?

interesting! I really like how the story was going, it would be a shame not to continue a good story like this! So if you would, please update :D I want to know how everything works out in the end.

I like it! Update soon! BTW... Is Aerith going to be here in this fic?

i like it. it's well written captures both characters and could have some serious weight behind it. look forward to reading more XD

I LOVE IT! Can't wait for the next chapter! :D

it is an interesting start to a new story, you got me interested now, one observation i must make is that comparing this story to your earlier ones i can see that your talent has come a long way, for one chapter and an introduction chapter at that, i found it very compelling and i'm eager to read more.

Very nice first chapter, hope more comes soon, it's definitely caught my attention

btw what's Fack?

Very well done! I liked it on my opinion. Good job Topaz and Valk! Even if you didn't finish the dream I'm pretty sure that you'll think of something good to write. Grrr . . . Reno you better not try to do anything to Tifa. :) I feel so bad for Cloud! Hope you update soon! Good luck!

~Gigi

Oh another person with Cloti dreams. I assume this one wasn't drug-induced? xD Anyway, it looks interesting so far. I feel bad for Cloud and I have an urge to punch Tifa ;) Looking forward to the next chapter.

Not too shabby! I think this is going to turn out to be a good story. but, what happens when you get to the part of the dream you wake up from? No one ever finishes a story in their sleep. (I know I don't.) Is that when you ask other peoples dreams? JK ;) I look forward to reading the rest.

Well, let me offer a heartfelt thank you to Topaz for having this dream in the first place. Then, of course, to you Valk because you've managed to make this one awesome, too. I love the whole "she's an heiress, he's a servant" angle and I can't wait to see how this moves forward. I thought Tifa's dad would be a total ogre, but he didn't seem so bad. Still, I'll have to wait and see his reaction later on when he finds out about Cloud's feelings. Anyway, Valk you already know what I'm looking forward, so I hope you update soon!