really touching scene. great job. bravo!

Fantastic. I was a bit skeptical because of the title, but this was amazing! IMHO you've perfectly captured the internal voice of Soubi. More please!

Awsome just awsome. I love it;)

This was perfect. I love how you captured all of Soubi's emotion from that particular chapter and immersed the story in it. Ritsuka was also very adorably in-character (which I think is a little harder to achieve with the dirtier fics). Your choice to have them explore each other was wise, I think, as it kept on with the mood of the story while making it quite believable. Loved it to bits )

Oh, wow! I wish I were capable of something this awesome! .

... lovely.

Very nicely done. Tender and subtle, also kudos on keeping the characters true to the story. Please continue writing, be it this story or another.

I really liked this story. Ritsuka and Soubi were in character(even if sometimes we wish Soubi's character were a bit different)-thanks so much for writing this. I absolutely love stories that take place in the canon time line, and there aren't enough of them. I hope you decide to write another chapter for this!

1. i would've been agrivated w/ him and

Aww. :) I like it. Thank you for taking the time to write it and post it! :)

oh! tha was such a good fanfction! no has doen a fic that is so resent to the story! i like it so much

! thank you for writing it! you are such a wounderfull story teller!thank you!

Amazing. This was absolutely an amazing story. I loved it. I hope you write another one. C:

i love this-it's soo soubi!(his mindset is very alien)& poor risyuka who is struck with all his problems & a frighter who needs special handling!