To annon, who reviewed on May 9, 2015:

My dear sir/madam,

I would dearly like to see you come up with a story that is worth my time, because you clearly cannot appreciate the written word.
The fact that this author has been brave enough to write this story in a language that everyone can read, even though it is not his/het first language, is a clear indicator that he/she has the potential to become a great writer.

Unlike you, sir/madam, who has severely abused the Review system of this site to delibarately humilate and possibly upset this author. And in a cowardly manner, I might add. If you do not have the ability to speak your mind in a kinder manner, I ask you to keep you vulgar opinions to yourself.

NightLight, I apologise for using your review page for my rant, but I had to speak my mind.

That being said, your story is quite good. And even though it has been a while is since you last updated, I hope you will continue this story.

To any other readers that read this:
Sorry for my long rant at the start, but I felt compled to speak my mind. I apologise if I offended anyone. (Except you, annon. I'm not apologising to you)

Hyvää yötä sullekin

I like this. Its cute and funny. Please write more.

your english is fuck awful! & ur story is worse! shit learn to speak english fuckin twat!

This story is hilarious and I love each bit of it.

I would like to read more please another chapter what happens ?
Between them two?

Damn purity law...won't work! Need some new blood in the lines...

Just re-read this story and I think it's great! Please, continue!

This is really cute, also there were some spelling mistakes that you made, like parfume is spelt perfume, apart from that I really enjoyed this can't wait to see what happens next _

How is Vinnie supposed to eat with a helmet? I sense disaster... :)

w00t!

ANOTHER UPDATE! D

Great story. I love how Throttle got it wrong the first time. Interesting how you added the purity issue; not many fic writers go that line and enjoy crossing the mice, I hope to hear what goes on about that.

Glad to see you've updated :)

Now for concrit- nouns like 'he' 'she' 'him' etc. don't have to be capitalized after a spoken sentance ending in a question mark. Just wanted to let you know.

'ok' should be 'okay', and 'Charley ma'am' could also be spelled 'Charley-ma'am', but that's just my personal way of doing it.

Looking forward to more!

I don't just like, I LOVE! D

I DEMAND MORE OF THIS AWESOMENESS!

next chappie please