Reviews for The Price of Hitsuzen
emmalilly21 chapter 21 . 1/22
this is good. most xxxholic fics are merely plagiarism with no effort to integrate things.
Memories-of-the-Shadows chapter 21 . 11/6/2019
I’m so sorry it took me so long to get caught up, but re-reading this was as wonderful as it always is! You just meld the two worlds so well, and Kagome is just the right mix of powerful and influential without her being /too/ much so. Thank you so much for writing this, it’s always a pleasure to read.
Ayjah chapter 21 . 11/1/2019
Any chance of a yearly post? Loved revisiting this one.
meganlarive chapter 21 . 8/20/2019
Re-re-reading and just wanted to say how much I enjoy this fic!
Tears Parallel chapter 21 . 8/12/2019
It took me some time to get back to reading this story, but thank you so much for continuing the story. I love the explanations you have between Kagome's behavior and tying it with InuYasha - they're two very compatible stories and they're believable! I am also happy to see Kagome slowly falling for someone who would treat her right and support her, rather than one who constantly belittles her. I always hoped that she'd have someone who understood and treated her as she should.

The foreshadowing to Yuuko not always being at the shop ... ouch! Still hurts my heart to know that she'll be gone, but it is a very important plot point that changed Watanuki. I know that when the manga reached the spider arc I was very impressed to see him learning, though also a little sad that his innocence was going away. I'm very interested on seeing your take on it, especially with all the research that you do to try and understand the cultural references! Thank you.
WaveMasterYami chapter 21 . 1/2/2019
I REALLY love this story! You're matching the themes up very well, and everything feels remarkably in-character. The creepy atmosphere is A. I really appreciate the idea of Sango reincarnating into Souta and continuing her sibling relationship with Kagome in the next life, as well, it's very sweet, and imagining Souta hefting hiraikotsu through Tokyo makes me laugh. I look forward to whatever you write next, and hope that time and circumstances will allow it to happen soon!
DarkLord0012 chapter 21 . 12/9/2018
Love this story so far and have reread it so many times hope you update soon can't wait to read what happens next
Guest chapter 21 . 11/29/2018
Please don't let Yuuko die in this. Gosh, that was the most heartbreaking part in the anime.
Shadow Wolf 15846 chapter 21 . 11/29/2018
Nice!
kakashixangela chapter 21 . 11/25/2018
Oh noooo Yuko ;(( god i really didnt like that part in the manga where she disappeared and watanuki just seemed so lost without her TT-TT i wonder if things’ll be that much diff with kagome around watanuki
HinekoAkahi chapter 21 . 11/24/2018
Uuuugh, I meant to comment before thisI meant to write back after your reply to my last comment, in factbut I am terrible and keep forgetting DX

Things are coming to a head, huh? I will admit that I know very little about Holic canon at this point and only vaguely remember the parts that cross over with TRC, so that'll be interesting!

You asked what languages I was doing at translating schoolit's German, English and Spanish for me, with German being my native language. Though I only started learning Spanish two years ago and honestly don't feel very confident with it yet...

Finally, good luck with your revisions! I'm sure you'll do great, but I'll keep my fingers crossed for you anywayThank you for sharing!
Mystic 777 chapter 21 . 11/23/2018
I'll admit, while reading the manga it took me a while to catch on to the Himawari thing you for the update!
TsukiyoTenshi chapter 21 . 11/23/2018
Well...Kagome has never hidden how Himawari's aura has unsettled her, but I can't help but wonder about how she will react when the truth of her comes out... I really hope that doesn't sound mean if me since I don't hate Himawari's character; more to the effect, I actually feel quite sorry for her...her very unnatural aura is one matter I wish either the manga or anime had gone into a bit further, like how and why her?

But that may as well be left to fans to consider and imagine for themselves.

The chapter was very well done, though I know the end draws near. Honestly, I'm surprised Yuuko divulged to Kagome what little she did. Cautious and Aware as she is, I didn't see that coming. Truth be told...the whole deal with Fei Wong Reed's greed, Clow's mistake, and Watanuki's situation really irked me...in many a way. Kagome, though...she can be intuitive when she wants to be...will she figure out what is going on or will she end up actually in the most of it all, finding out what's happened after the fact?
House of falling cards chapter 17 . 11/23/2018
I just realized that special friend might be Sakura?
ToonyTwilight chapter 21 . 11/23/2018
And with this chapter I remember how xxxHolic ends in the manga. Oh boy I wonder how much will change now...
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