story line was pretty good for the most part was pretty good, except for the tiva part. tony was never a good match for ziva, as he was always the playboy and flirt and would never ever settle down with anyone. otherwise a good read.

I am on chapter 4 and I love it so far! And I hate doing this but it messes with my head. The Hebrew word for father or dad is Aba. It’s in there as Ada and it’s kind of weird lol but I do love the story!

Amazing, I was touched the whole time! This is wonderful! I just wished it ended like this in the program, thank you for making me believe in Tiva more than ever now! Amazing keep these up and keep me posted! Xx

awesome but can you make one that is part two or do you already have one

Omg this is amazing, I think that you should have said who her father is tho. Personally I think it may be Gibbs. Very good story. I cried at some parts of it. Well done x

I love this story. it is really good

I would breaker more then his nose if it were me

Again, awesome job:) loved this:)

wow. so far i am in love with this story and im only on chapter 2! haha i love the fact that ziva has a mystery daughter! but whose the father?

I love happy endings:)

sweet looking forward to the sequel

Great story I will be waiting for the next story

Amazing chapter love it post more soon :)

completely agree screw rule 12

Great chapter but you could have went a little further at the end