It's cute!

Aww that was sweet. I love seeing them as parents with a happy, little family.

it's always difficult to make kidfic for Riza and Roy in character but somehow you did it - kudos to you and thank you for this adorable piece!

:3 this is the cutest fic ever. I love their personalities!

Loved it and it's just like Roy to spoil his children.

This is so cute! I adore seeing Roy as a father and seeing Roy and Riza married and happy! :)

Aww, what a cute story! :) The story feels very natural. I found the culinary misadventure particularly humourous as my dad did something similar once (like Riza, my mom didn't approve of the meal either). Nice work. :)

Very heartwarming. :)

RoyAi kidfic! *squees* somehow, Roy just does seem like the type to spoil his own kids rotten XDXDXD And of course he needs Riza to run his life forevermore! I can't imagine what kind of state he'd be in if he had to organize HIMSELF...

I'm at the part in my re-read of FMA and am at the part where Roy goes through the gate. So of course I had to go back and re-read this story just to make myself feel better. I love it just as much as when I first read it. I love that Roy's cursed with daughters. I love that he and Riza are ADORABLY happy together. I love that he has his life together and a home and a family and a career, even without his sight. I love this story, so thank you for writing it.

I haven't reviewed this already? That's terrible, seeing as I love it so much and have read it at least 10 times by now. I find this story simply adorable, so subtly sweet and heartwarming. I love the interaction between Roy and the two girls, you write it so naturally and believably. And the Roy/Riza interactions are just lovely and so in character. Its great too how you didn't make a big thing out of Roy being blind in this fic (I know its terrible of me, but personally I was a tiny bit disapointed when Roy got his sight back at the end of the manga. Is that wrong?) but just made subtle allusions to it that the reader could pick up on. Thank you for writing such a lovely story. :)

I've been reading your fic for a long time now, mostly in the form of stalkage, and you're pretty much my favorite author on the site. But that aside, I have to let you know how COMPLETELY RIDICULOUS it is that you have me so addicted to your Roy/Riza fics, considering that they are a couple I know NOTHING ABOUT because they are in a show/manga that I HAVE NEVER SEEN NOR READ. I don't even know how it's possible that you have me involved in a fandom that might as well be based on a manga that was never published.

I hope you're proud of yourself.

That's all.

This story is made entirely of warm fuzzies. I love it so much. Very clever how you managed to not spoil about Roy going blind, but reference it subtly enough that people who are up to date in the manga would notice. Lovely little story.

For some reason I like the idea of Roy turning Riza into a baby factory.

Thank you for writing it! I love the kids and I love the fact that Roy stayed the way he is and still is able to live his life and work for his cause. Caroline is typical child and Roy seems to be exactly the kind of a father who spoils his childred.