I don't usually imagine love between two male characters; but Shaun and Desmond just seem so... right and you incorparating altair and malik ( who are also perfect) brilliant!

I've never read one where shaun was malik's desendant what a brilliant idea. I LOVE THIS

Hh, lovely story, nicely written. I love it. :-)

Oooo. I like this behind-the-scenes feel. And how Lucy gave Shaun an ultimatum, haha!

Headcannon established. Oh dear god.

Brilliant, by the way!

Oh man, I would have loved more chapters, but all good stories need a good ending and this was delightfully satisfying. I guess that's my inner fan whining.

Oh god, this is fantastic, and amazing, and everything this reader ever wanted to see in this pairing. While the chances of the plot really ever being true is slim, the idea is always something to enjoy. You made the story well-realistic; no fluff, no strange and petty scenes, and nothing over dramatic. It was enough. The characters stayed intact, and your work was decently written. Not only that, you didn't refer to that silly dynamic between two same-gendered couples. That was an unimaginable big plus. Thank you for the story, the work, and for this. Kudos.

This story is amazing and I love all of the details going into what is going on in the story. I can actually see what is going on and imagine the faces, voices, and the movements happening.

I like the use of many characters but it isn't too chaotic and it is easy to follow along.

I have read this fanfiction many, many, MANY times and I keep on loving more than the previous time.

You fit the characters perfectly and their personalities are not completely out of character that I find very common on other stories I read on here, especially Shaun.

I also like you didn't make one person completely "Ohemgee kawaii desu uke" and have "I AM COMPLETELY DOMINANT SEME".

Keep up the good work, and look forward to another story.

Very well written,

Keep going!

This was really, really awesome. In fact, probably one of my favorite featuring the boys. I liked that you included Lucy and Rebecca but not as anti-christs (which seems to happen a lot) but as engaging characters. It was great that you managed to make a really satisfying story within three chapters that retained the quality and feel of the original characters. Great work! Really loved it!

Fantastic, outsanding, all of those nice words that describe you perfectly. This story, particularly, is wonderful!

~Vithian

Very cute :D

Interesting twist.. me likey very much.

This totally deserves so many more reviews than it has. Very well written, and I actually genuinely laughed out loud at certain parts. Shaun is such an interesting personality to read, especially when he has his ancestor's voice in his head, haha. Loved the ending, too.

Just wanted to let you know that I read this fic at the kink meme just now. It is amazing! Great job!