Es una historia muy bonita gracias xoxo

This has to he one of the stupidest fanfiction's ever. You have adults acting like immature spoiled brats. You failed miserably to capture any of the characters personalities. The whole thing reads like it was written by an unsophisticated adolescent.

If you have to beg for reviews in order to write then you shouldn't bother writing.

Publishing the lyrics of the songs like this is a copyright violation and disrespectful to the artist who own the copyrights.

Well, if she had to choose, definitely the right choice! Team Dimitri!

Again, this is already done, but another crazy idea ... she has them both. I'm a reverse harem fan. #why choose

So, this is already finished by the time I am reading it, but ... I was wondering if he was gay. The fashion sense, the fun flirty attitude, idk jyst reminds me of a few gay guys I know. Anyway, random idea.

WOO

THIS IS AMAZING

Okay, I wouldn't go that far. I liked it, but it has some flaws.

I didn't like the way Dimitri harassed Rose in the middle. He would never do that, his principles are too strong for (practically) rape.
Tasha wouldn't show her emotions like that, she is a bitch, true, but she's still a grown woman.

But all in all, this is a really good fanfic

Great chapters, Van You Mabey Write other chapters. After her Graduate, live totgether.
Thank You

3ed it
keep writing

lovely xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Okay, this is amazing but...
Don't think it should be K. A bit too innaproppriate for the kids on the interent. Maybe T would be better?

Wow. Sooooo cheese, in a good way, I LOVE ALL THE FLUFF!
:P

Aww, you missed out Adrian love... :(
If it was my place to say, I would go CR and make Dimka really jelly, but it seems not... :(
But I have not finished reading :P