I'm late, but cool story! This is the second time I read it, but the first that I bothered to review! Since I am intrigued, I seriously hope that you ended this story instead of leaving it on a cliffhanger, since I can't remember how this story ends... I'm not even sure if I DID leave a review last time! Guess I'm going to find out...

Hey Kina, I was just looking over this story again, and I realized I hadn't posted a comment for the end of the story. Hopefully you'll still see this, even though it's been a while. It was so much fun chatting and reading each other's fanfictions, and I hope that even though we've slipped out of touch (my fault, I didn't see that message you sent to my NaNo account until a few months later!) that things are going well for you. :) Our misadventures in fanfiction writing will always be a favorite memory of mine!

Wonderful absolutely Wonderful

This looks like a good half way point to stop my reading frenzy for the night and start a writing one instead, seeing that Iggy has been freed. And I can honestly say that this got even better than before.

You know how I said in my first review that the Director seems a little over the top in her sadism. Her last appearance seemed a lot less of that, and it worked great! Also, Jeb makes me feel like punching the guy when I compare him to the MR novels, and that makes me feel like he's a great character for bringing out a lot of emotion.

The part where Max freed herself from the machine seemed a little weird since the scientists and Angel had no part in the actual freeing, but you still made it work in story, so there's no problem. Also, the Snapple bottle was (although admittedly random) a great way to add some light to the darker situation that Max was in for the 3 or 4 chapters.

And, of course, Iggy. I really liked how he didn't want to go. That's it. I say this because even though it goes against the greater good of the Flock, I could see myself far more likely to want to escape in my dreams than to wake up in the School. And also it provides a couple more hitches to the escape plan, which makes for great reading.

All in all, I can't wait to probably finish this story tomorrow! The writing is excellent, the story is entertaining, and it is VERY hard to stop at this very moment, but humans require sleep to function properly. Though I probably will just write instead. :P

Thank you for the read! :D

I am so glad I stalk other peoples profiles, because I only found this story now. And it is freakin' amazing!

The actual set-up that was explained this chapter for everything that was happening made the story make a little more sense, and I like most of the personalities you've given everyone. The only one I don't like is the Director; I think you made her too much of a sadist. Granted, it gives a little bit of humor (whether intended or not), but you just go overboard.

But that's pointing out the squashed mosquito on the windshield of a brand new car; overall it doesn't mean much. This story is still amazing and I can't wait to read the rest of it; which there is conveniently a lot of! :D

Wow. Just...wow.

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...moment of surprise...

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Your blog is cute!

Mockingjay dragged on, but it also had some good action, and OMG TEAM PEETA ALL THE WAY

Child, you are a writing master! Oh dang, Im so impressed with your writingness

Beautiful ending. That's really all I can say.

I know what you mean about the Maximum Ride fandom. It's what I've been focused on for years, and what got me started with fanfiction, but I've been drifting away from it for a while now. I'm rather sad this story is ending, since it was one of the few MR stories I still followed.

See you in the Doctor Who fandom, I suppose. :)

I hate to be the bringer of bad news, but there's a typo... You put 'It was now easy to identify yas Angel'. Other than that, it was a fabulous ending. Cute and ever so slightly inconclusive. P

Liz

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! I DON'T WANT IT TO END!

But I do get the 42 reference.

Well, I've followed this story nearly since it began and I've loved and read it all the way through. I've only been on fanfiction for a year, but I still understand what you mean about how much it helps writing improve in such a short amount of time. If I really won't be seeing you again, than I'll just say this. You're an awesome writer with great ideas and plots, keep doing what you do! -Aj.

Awwww… It's over… I loved it so much! Dang it. It's over! I'm so sad I'm repeating myself! And that doesn't happen very often. :) It's such a bittersweet ending to an amazing story.

awww, professor Henry! And I think max and fang behaved very max and fang...ish. anyway, update soon!