I like the story but your pacing makes it break apart a lot and stops my rhythm of reading.
That mainly comes from you explaining the other girls thought process even though the perspective is focused on the first girl.
I'd suggest just keeping it to one perspective or cutting down on unnecessary exposition that doesn't add anything.

Thanks for the read!
- Vort

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Very little is worse then Avatar fangirls (relax I am one of them) but oh dear creepy stalkers are horrible!

Why is it the best authors are the ones that give up the quickest? This was so interesting and could you at least pass it down to someone to continue? Please? I know it won't be the same but... I just need to read more.

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Well, if ur quitting, can I steal ur story?

What the hell this story was great

Cool! This is cool.

Really cool

Cool. Sounds interesting.

I just wanted to say thank you so much for writing this. The things I loved most about this were the stereotypes and the flaws. It was so much fun to read. It always felt like a purely fan girly reboot of avatar that I always wish I would get of my ass and write! I understand you wanting to leave this behind and well thanks for letting us know.
I hope you continue writing though because you really are good!

I ABSULUTLY LOVE THIS BOOK! Sooooo 4 all of your loyle fans out there who would never even think about us to stop reading this book could you make book 2? We onestly dont mind the wait!

It's amazing as always. I'm not even that obsessed with Avatar anymore but I still always look forward to reading this. I understand about the college thing, it's a lot of work, and I just want you finishing the story. I'm hoping you'll do the entire series, but I understand if you cannot. It's long and you're busy. Still, a girl can dream. I've been with this story for two years and it'll be coming on three soon. I really don't want it to end.
You're such a talented writer.
Love, Maddie

I don't CARE

I know I'll keep checking in to see if you updated :)