Reviews for The Chain |
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Sparrow1011 chapter 4 . 8/15/2017 Wouldn't mind reading about the Teams reaction to seeing Roy doing a runner. |
0-mirage-0 chapter 4 . 1/20/2017 Stop it! Was that a Skyrim reference! Thanks for the Fun read! Good job, and keep writing! |
0-mirage-0 chapter 3 . 1/20/2017 Are we babysitters for unsupervised internet users now? Fix this, add your content back. If we voluntarily censor our own literature, we voluntarily surrender our words, who our characters are, and how they may choose to live. Your rating and disclaimer is your consideration and your respect, your content is yours. This chapter was lovely. Suffered no decline with your June 2012 edits, but its the principle of it all. To edit our characters as we write them, or go back with a scalpel and take. I refuse - and goodness knows enough of us do. Don't let the negligent user win the war as a bully, when with a rating, and with a disclaimer, none of us are out of line. This review isn't my soapbox :) I enjoyed the chapter and was pleased to see Roy and Ed rejoin with such level heads. |
0-mirage-0 chapter 1 . 1/20/2017 Not the depressing piece I want to read right now...why do I do this to myself, continuing on to chapter 2? It's an obvious compliment that it's depressing at all however. Writing raw emotion is sometimes the hardest. Good job. |
lucifer-in-my-head chapter 4 . 1/13/2016 Oh man Mustang made me laugh this chapter. Gotta love it all. Great job! |
lucifer-in-my-head chapter 1 . 1/13/2016 *quietly cries in a corner hoping all will be well soon* |
LuckySleven chapter 4 . 6/8/2015 Hehehehe, while this was pretty angst-y,the last chapter with Al was very fun to read. |
seireidoragon chapter 4 . 12/10/2014 Oh my gosh this was brilliant! Great job! |
GlOmP3R chapter 4 . 5/16/2014 Awh protective Am is so badass ! Loved it ! Kickass job ! |
GlOmP3R chapter 3 . 5/16/2014 Lmao ! Loved this , kickass job(: |
Guest chapter 4 . 4/25/2014 great fic |
destinarea chapter 4 . 7/24/2013 Reading Mustang's runaway scene made me dissolve into a fit of giggles. Just the very thought of it.. Oh, excellent story! |
DrummerDancer chapter 4 . 6/23/2013 Loved this! |
Half Demon Alchemist chapter 4 . 4/29/2013 Awe this was adorable! You go Alphonse! |
Kain Sinner chapter 4 . 2/18/2013 Loved it! Brilliantly done and wrapped up neatly :) -Kain |