This story was a good read. I wonder, as another reader/reviewer wrote, that Sam may wonder where Frodo is and try to catch up to him. Still, you did good keeping Frodo in-character. Seems Frodo can't go on without his friend Sam.

Good work.

Aria Breuer

A great story. Very well written.

This is beautifully sad. You've managed to capture the way Frodo feels for Sam very well in such a short fic.

So sad... *sniff* Beautifully written.

oh this is so sweet! even though it is short it is very good! hooray you! Nim.

Yay! It's good I like ...cute!

this is a great story and you should continue it! Sam comes after him of course :) something anyway. You are a great writer I see and I will read some of your other stuff in a moment, if you have any other *hoping*

Namaste!

Please break my heart and write a sequel to this depicting Sam waking up and realizing Frodo has indeed left for good: his walking stick is gone, his pipe, his sack, plenty of food beside, along with a fair amount of missing wardrobe and his heavy cloak.

I want to see Sam's desolatation, his pain at being abandoned without so much as a goodbye or explaination. Yes. That would be quite lovely.

Although I did like this. It was very nice. It seems to be begging for more though. I went to click the "chapter 2" button and . . . alas there was none.

*wipes away tears* *Sniffles* So sweet & so sad! ! ! ! Awwwwwwe!

That was so sad and the quote was perfect. I have read it a few times a every time i cry because it makes me think of what i would feel it i had to leave my best friend. That is so good. Will you write anymore LOTR fanfic?

Oh. That is so sweet.

Not bad at all. Do you do longer ones or is this just the first chapter of more to come? I would be interested to see more. Nice name by the way.

Hey! Love this fic! (tear!) :)

Aw! It's very good, except unless you want to insinuate a *relationship* between Frodo and Sam, you should probably change the "i want to lay my head on his chest" thing. ALthough, maybe you should keep it in there. I DON'T KNOW! Good fic, keep writing!

Awwwww! So sad! I liked it.