The idea is pretty good but the characters are a bit OOC.

Dami's usually a bit harsh when it comes to Tim, even more so than everyone else. And Tim's not that good with handling Dami (normally).

Tim's usually a tad awkward and Dami talks a bit formal.

The story is pretty good, but you might wanna mention that Dami's groggy or isn't thinking straight.

Again, the story is pretty good. Just get to know the characters you're working with a bit better.

I'm looking forward to reading your future works! Your ideas are pretty sweet!

Its so fluffy im gonna die!

MY HEART MELTED BECAUSE OF HOW CUTE THIS IS!

Aww... Brotherly love trumps nightmares every time.

aww i love this. i wish this happened in the comics.

"He's so tense he's not even technically lying down; he's clenched up all his muscles, and he's tipped over sideways on the bed. But he's not letting himself sink into the mattress."

This was a really cute fic. But what made me actually LOL was that part. I could picture Damian like, laying on the bed like a log, face scrunched up and everything. Oh god, LOL.

For your first time with Batman (soundswrongI'msorry), I say it's very good. The characters' were still in character (which makes me applaud you) and the narration was great! It fit Tim's POV like a glooooove.

God, this fic was adorable.

GOOD JOB!

Awwh. This was extremely adorable. I know this may offend some, but I see Damian and Tim as a pairing (when Damian's older, of course), and this was just perfect. Adorable and interesting in every way. I love Damian when he acts like the haughty bastard he is, but he's downright adorable in this.

OMG! I LOVE DAMIAN WHEN HE'S ACTING HIS ACTUAL AGE! IT'S SO CUTE! But it's kind of creepy and unnatural since its Damian. AND OMG! TIM IS BEING BROTHERLY AND NICE TO HIM! THATS SO CREEPY! BUT ITS SO CUTE AND ADORABLE! I LOE YOU FOR MAKING THIS! (gives you a lot of flowers and cookies) *Hugs you* AWESOME! MAKE ANOTHER ONE! PLEASE! I WILL LOVE YOU FOREVER! PLEASE!

Adorable Damian. Very cute.

Definitely cute.

SO ADORABLE.

You can not nderstand how much i love this fic.

Cute,