Kind of curious how Hayate would know proper protocol for how agents of the Moon Kingdom are supposed to address their sovereign. Nevermind that the princess wasn't originally military to begin with so that wouldn't have occurred to them.

I just finished your story and I have to admit it's an excellent story and it is my personal belief that you should do a sequel I believe they have season 2 3 and if there's a 4th season of Sailor Moon on a website called cartoon crazy dot TV you should be able to watch it there

unimari is misspelled

*snickers* The shift to make the "destined pairing" also cements the idea that Fate would castrate Mamoru if anyone tries to push the "destined lovers" crap on Nanoha. They're old enough to be more than best friends and crushing, after all~! By this age, she'd be plenty well aware enough to call bullshit on top of her already driven-to-new-heights Protective Wrath. Though trying to claim the pairing with the original ages would probably get Mamoru - even a horrified and embarrassed and flailing "Nope! Forget it!" Mamoru- lynched, along with anyone else trying to push the idea, by pretty much everyone still alive of the Nanoha cast. Which would also be amusing.

You should do a sequel to thos atory. I want to see what happens next.

Wonderful!

This was very good, thank you for writing it.

Did you ever do a sequel

The A/N touched me so much that I had to comment and dedicate this verse of The Lost Battalion- Sabaton to the Senshi despite never watching Sailor Moon.

Far from their land as they made their stand
A disregarded demand
It's surrender or die and the stakes are high
They live and they die there's no time for goodbye
Weapon in hand as they made their stand
Still disregarding demand
They would never comply they would rather die
Broke through the blockade they were finally saved

Applause for them for their tenacity.

very cool fanfic

lol

those images tho

This... was a great read. I'm one to give criticism, but for this I have none. Excellent work blending the two worlds together.

Great fic! 3

However, someone is sporking it. They think it isn't nearly as good as it is.

I guess I will find out the reason for why you have Precia showing up at juuuust the moment when the two series meet here, but fuck this feels way too contrived. It just feels so unnecessary to involve her here.