Reviews for Bite me, Baby! |
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Elizkatia23 chapter 8 . 5/1 This story is amazing and wonder if you going to update it or it's discontinued? |
Crimson-Finder chapter 8 . 2/14/2017 Please please update this! I really like this story |
Suezanne chapter 8 . 12/7/2015 interesting |
Janara chapter 8 . 12/6/2015 I truly love this story |
PleiadesWolfe chapter 8 . 11/26/2015 Just don't hurt his brothers and you will be fine. I'm interested to hear more on what is happening in Halloween town. I would like to see the soldiers fight with Cloud. |
everyday means everyday papapa chapter 8 . 7/8/2015 I love Cloud here. XD He's so badass. Please update soon. Love the story! |
LoreilDarksky00 chapter 8 . 7/6/2015 Goodness I stumbled onto this this hot mess like an hour ago and I binged straight from this fridge that is filled with blessed Sweet Mother Teresa and Jesus' tears held in the carved out husk of a donated unicorn horn, decorated with pheonix downs. I am absolutely in love with this story, and I can't wait for more! The way you write the characters is so engaging and realistic (I sat here laughing at, like, four in the morning. And I'm a silent night owl, so that's saying something.) and all I want is more of their sass and adorable anger fits and goodness please keep writing this if you can because if you don't I will cry. The only thing I can suggest as far as constructive criticism is spell checking on your own or with a beta because occasionally you miss a letter or two (for ex, -ed) at the end of a word, but we all know what you meant. :3 I know I'm going to keep an eye out on this Holy Grail of a story! I look forwards to the next chapter! |
Shadowheart51 chapter 8 . 7/2/2015 Love it! |
xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 8 . 7/1/2015 I like it a lot! ** |
madworld27 chapter 8 . 7/1/2015 What is the history between Cloud and Leon? How will the Strifes know their mates? So many questions. I look forward to the next installment. :) |
SpiritOfTheLandXIII chapter 8 . 7/1/2015 AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH! MY FACE HURTS FROM SMILING TOO MUCH! THAT WAS TOO CUTE~! i love it! ahahahahahahahahahaha poor Axel. even if the goddess had heard him he would probably go ignored too XD |
KpopTrash1215 chapter 8 . 7/1/2015 Thanks for updating, this story is awesome and I can't wait for the next update. |
UltimateNinjaOfDoom chapter 8 . 7/1/2015 dude that was awesome, i look forward to reading more strife humor, and this new interesting twist on newborn vamps. update soon please :) |
ladynikkie chapter 8 . 7/1/2015 Yay! |
Tired1999 chapter 8 . 6/30/2015 Things are getting interesting. |